This is an with telling eclipse from victoria's pov, since i finde her one of the most interesting characters.
Victoria pov:
I have been waiting for a long time for this moment. Revenge is so close. So sweet I can almost taste it. I am crouching behind a pine tree, watching my victims. I cannot be too hasty, for one impulsive movement could ruin everything. My senses are heightened even more than usual, by the underlying fear coursing through my veins. I know that I might not make it out of this today, but if I can dispose of the girl in the process, it will be worth everything, even my existence.
After all, there is nothing left for me now anyway. James is gone. I know I am not alive; I do not have a heart, but if I did it would be shattered into millions of splintered pieces. Painful shards of glass that everyday seem to tear and rip into the gaping chasm inside of me that is devoid of love. Now it is filled with jealousy. Jealousy and hate. I hate that irksome girl. I loathe her. She is like a fly to me: something irritating to be killed. I am jealous of her too. She has everything. She has what I want. Love. She is the reason my love was taken from me. And she must pay for it with her life.
I make my move. My patience holds no longer. Now, Isabella Swan must die.
Note: i'm not sure where to go next. please reveiw and let me know weather i should stick to the storyline or give it a twist in the tale :P thanks!