She had been waiting her whole life. First for her parents to return from the war and then for the brothers to come home. It had been nearly six years since she last saw him. Six years of looking out the window every morning, hoping to see him crossing over the hill. He'd knock on the door and say with that goofy grin that was completely his own, "Didja miss me?" She wised the waiting would end, but it never would. She would be waiting for the man who could never return. The man on the other side. Edward.
Drabble. exactly 100 words.
I only accept constructive reviews. I don't care if you think I suck at life and should go be emo and die. If you have time to review a story you don't like, you have time to be constructive in your criticism. Get over yourself if you think that you telling me my story sucks and there's nothing I can do to be a better writer will make me stop writing.
That is all.
over and out
Tsukiko