Throughout the years
you've pushed and worked
fought for what you believe
the challenges you've had to face
the stream of pain and tears
you lost the man who taught you never to give in
friends left you far behind
told you that you could never be
a man to be admired
or even amount to anything
you rose to meet their challenge
you overcame the hardships
once a boy who had a dream
now a man with a purpose
I only accept constrictive reviews. I do not want to read about how you think I suck at life and should go be emo and die. If you don't like it, tell me what you don't like about it and how I can improve it. Don't bother wasting your time to tell me that you think it sucks. Flames only make me want to write more to piss off the flamers.
Thank you that is all.
Over and Out
Tsukiko