Please review and the only thing about this story is that mac and kaori are both sixteen okay here it is
Kaori's eyes fluttered open as the morning breeze swept into her hotel room. She and the others had got to Tokyo really late last night, and she decided to sleep. She turned and looked at her clock to find it was only five thirty and rolled back over. Kaori tried to go back to sleep but it didn't work, so she got up, took a shower, and put some clothes on. "Well better practice for snow dream." She said to herself. She grabbed her gloves and board and headed outside into the welcoming snow. She got on her board and began riding into the sunrise, heading towards the jumps and leaps of the track. Rhazel had given them his permission to use the course to get used to it, and well no time like the present. As she started down the track, she began to feel the cold air bite and sting at her face but she didn't mind. Kaori saw a figure who gliding down the track to and recognized him immediately.
"Mac." She said softly.
Although she would never say anything she had to admit she liked him. He was cute, in your face, bad and a great dj. They hung out and talked for a long period and they laughed and joked but she'd never say anything.
"Mac!" Kaori yelled as she slowed down he did to.
"Yo Kaori, what's up?" he said.
"Nothing." She said smiling
"So why you out here so early?"
"I could ask you the same thing."
She and Mac looked at each other for a long time and then Mac challenged her to a race. "Okay, but remember Mac I'm number one." She said. (kaori speaks good English now)
Kaori and Mac started down the track, head to head. The jump was coming up and they both braced themselves. Kaori jumped doing a pirouette grind and Mac doing his walking the dog trick. They landed at the same time and continued down the track. Kaori turned to look at Mac only to find him staring at her. Distracted by him she caught an edge and fell face first into the snow. Mac stopped, laughing and pointing. Kaori picked a some snow, made it into a ball, and threw it at him. When it hit him she started laughing only to get hit back. They began snowball fighting, and it went on for a couple minutes. They both fell back in the red faced and laughing, making snow angels.
"Yo Kaori what was that for?" Mac asked.
"Laughing at me!" she giggled. They lay there for a while and decided to head back to the hotel. "I want a rematch!" Kaori said. "You'll get one at the race." He replied. And they walked up to hotel.