Okay, now I am currently rewriting this story; as well as writing my current fan fic. Therefore; I'm just gonna post this one, then post my updated one whenever I get it done, to help with this re-wright, I'd like some posititve, and negative feedback. I will try to fix all errors that I, or anyone else sees, but there is no garentee. One major problem I would like everyone to skip (as I am announcing it right now), they are out of character. I'm hoping to fix that soon, thank you.
Dr. Eggman had created a Metal Sonic, his ultimate creation to dominate the world, but the artificial Sonic got out of control, took the form of Eggman, and called all the heroes of their time. Team Sonic, along with others, were not aware of this as they attempted to stop "Eggman". But the Metal Overlord soon showed his true self, and the final battle was fought. The four teams united and stopped this new threat, only to see that Dr. Eggman had once again escaped. Now, some time later, evil strikes again, but this time, Eggman isn't the only big problem. There are new emeralds, new threats, and the most dangerous and challenging battle yet. I tell you now, the story, of The Elemental Emeralds.
The Elemental Emeralds
Emerald Island 3:07 A.M. Day 1
"I've been guarding this Master Emerald for some time now, 23yrs. to be exact. Still... why was I chosen for this job? It makes no sense." Knuckles was pacing back and forth, his hands folded behind his back. Not a sound was in the air, except the occasional chirping of wildlife. "Who's there!" Knuckles formed a fighting position, preparing for whatever he might meet. "Ow, hey!" He flew back a couple feet on impact to a punch that seemed to have come out of nowhere. A small crater formed where he landed. A dark figure appeared. The sun blinded Knuckles' eyes. "Eggman?" "Eggman? That bafoon? Ha! I would never be caught dead while in league with him!" As soon as he was done talking, he lunged a huge stick through the chest of Knuckles, killing him instantly. The stranger walked up to the Master Emerald. "SHOW ME WHERE THE CHAOS EMERALDS LIE!" A big beam of light that lit the night sky like a rocket, shot out of the Master Emerald and landed on Island 5. "So, they're all in one place, how convenient." He looked around. "I think I'll take this too." He left, taking the Master Emerald with him.
It is now 3:15 A.M. Day 1
Island 5 3:20 A.M. Day 1
"Yeah!" Sonic was jumping from treetop to treetop at incredible speeds. As the wind was blowing past him at the height of every jump. Suddenly, a tree disappeared. Then another, and another. Sonic quickly realized this. One by one trees fell until it came to him.
"Hello Sonic." The tree Sonic was standing on suddenly disappeared. He fell and hit the ground with a loud thud. When Sonic got up, he transformed as several beams of blinding light shot out of him, he had become Super Sonic. But as soon as this was accomplished, it failed. Sonic was struck down with ease. The emeralds were gone. Sonic could barely stand.
"Who are you?" The mysterious attacker made a small laugh.
"Me? I am Axel the Hedgehog, and you my blue blurry friend, are dead!" He transformed into Super Axel, ran up at Sonic, and hit him so hard he was forced through several trees. Sonic couldn't move. Axel then flew high above the island. He stuck his hands out in front of him. "Chaos Reign!" The seven Chaos Emeralds shot out of his hands faster than a bullet could leave the barrel of a gun. Upon impact, Island 5 was destroyed. Sonic and Knuckles... are dead.
It is now 3:30 A.M. Day 1
