WooHoo! YAY! Finally I can show you one of my stories! Yay! It's not the best but I'm still working on it. Come on it's my first shot at EVER writing a fan fic. I will GLADLY welcome reviews as long as you're polite. I'd be SOOO vewy happy to see nice (and helpful) weviews about my stowies so PWEEZE help me out! Anyways ON WITH THE STORY READING!

EDIT: Updated only to correct structure, grammar, and spelling.

"Kilie, sector 34 needs an extermination; we got a bit of a sewage rat problem."

"Well then take care of it! Is an evacuation needed?"

"Yeah, I…think so…I could be wrong…"

"Check again! We can't take any risks. And put the C-Squad on it."

"C-Squad? They're doing sector 8."

"What?! I'll be right there."

A young woman with long, black hair stuffed a comm. back into her pocket. She was riding a dune buggy through the streets of Corceia, a city in the wastelands. She swiftly made a left turn, accidentally running over a man's hat when she swerved to the right. The man sweared at her but she didn't notice. She had more important things to think about. Having to oversee the extermination process in sector 34 would put a huge impact on her busy schedule. She made a right turn, pulled out her comm. and dialed a number. The comm. beeped three times then stopped. "Sape? It's Kilie," she said.

A man's voice replied, "Kilie?"

"Sape, meet me at sector 34; we gotta take care of a rat problem."

"Okay. I'm in sector 12 now. Someone started a fire."

"You just about done?"

"Yeah," Sape answered, "I'll be right over."

"Okay." Kilie tucked the comm. back into her pocket. She then made another right turn and went straight for a while. "Ugh," she thought, "I can't believe this. It's the sixth time this week we needed to exterminate these stupid sewage rats. No doubt it's going to end up in another closing down of a sector." Kilie pulled up into a sector filled with soldiers, all of which had black armor and a red lightning bolt on their chest armor. She stepped out of the buggy and brushed off some sand from her green shirt and tan shorts that had blown up from the ground. She pushed past the crowd toward a man with slimmer black armor and no helmet.

"Sape," she called out.

The man turned around. He had blonde hair that spiked and the two black lines - one on each of his cheeks - that all soldiers had, except Kilie.

"Kilie, I was able to find some information out," he started, "This isn't just a minor sewage rat problem. The rats keep coming from somewhere over there," he said pointing to a dark alley, "I got some guys checking it out. A woman who lives here got fatally ill when one bit her two weeks ago. She's still in recovery."

"Did you start evacuating?" Kilie asked.

"No, not yet," Sape answered.

Kilie walked into the center of the crowd. "Alright I want this place evacuated right away! Make sure everybody is out," she said.

Soldiers started to move, going around the sector knocking on doors, getting the citizens out, and running through the houses, making sure no one was left. Sape grabbed three soldiers and told them to get three dune buses, large dune buggies that were capable of holding up to fifteen people per bus.

After the three soldiers left, two others ran towards Kilie and Sape.

"We found where the rats are coming from," one started,

"It's a hole behind a building. There's a gap between the wall and the building where they can squeeze in through," the other one finished.

"Which building?" Kilie asked.

"That one, ma'am," one said, pointing to the building on the right of the dark alley.

"Alright. Thank you. Help evacuate the citizens." Kilie said.

"Yes, ma'am," the men ran off.

"Well," Kilie started turning towards Sape, "now we know where they're coming from. Once everyone's out we can start."

"How are we going to get them out of the hole? Gas them? If we do that we'll have to close down the sector afterwards," Sape said.

"I know," Kilie sighed, "I know."

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