"Lack of reviews is the greatest killer of fan fic writers out there. We at the institute wish to let the public know of how they can pitch in to save our dying writers.
Drop a review every other chapter. It may not seem like much, but reviews are actually what many of us want to see. That, and hits. Hits do make us happy but we don't really know if people like our story or not.
What you call being "too lazy to review" is what we call "a flame to the pages" as the writers. That one minute or two that you felt "too lazy" to review is another minute of creeping discouragement that all writers feel as they begin to think...
"Why am I even here…?"
"What's even the point of continuing?"
"My skills must be terrible…no one cares for my story…"
"I'll never be a good writer...I quit."
These are only a few thoughts that go through every writer's head- that go through MY head- when we put out a chapter / story with all our heart and soul within, and we sit there…and sit…and wait…and not a single person says even a word. If you're not a writer, you have NO IDEA how much that hurts…
If you ARE a writer, then I'm sure you know just how great it feels when someone is kind enough to leave a heartwarming and encouraging review, and you read it, smiling while thinking…"Wow…fuck...I did it…" So, why not give fellow writers the same luxury here?
Jack POV
It's been about six weeks and the Tournament is tomorrow. It's around 11:00 P.M and I probably should be asleep. A small part of me was worried but the rest of me wasn't the reason was I had my peerage train hard for it to ensure that they would win.
Erza had managed to create a powerful blade which she called the Demon Blade Crimson Sakura. She had also gained a new powerful armor which turned out to be her balance breaker. It went by the name Nakagami Armor and only few have ever been able to unlock it.
Then there was Mirajane. She had combined her abilities from her other forms and used it to give herself an upgrade , Satan Soul: Algeria which could easily be considered her strongest form however the downsides were that it had a time limit and it consumed a lot of power.
Samus and Arcee got some upgrades as well. Samus had been given the newly developed Ascalon III which was a holy demonic dragon slayer sword that could produce blue lightning that had traits of holy, demonic and draconic powers. While Arcee's apex armor weapon system had been unlocked by Cortana.
I then decided to stop thinking about this and went downstairs to go soak in the underground hot springs to relieve my stress. Once down there I sat in the hot water and let my stresses float away with the water. After, what seemed like minutes, I heard someone come downstairs. I wondered who it was as I thought everyone was asleep I would soon get my answer when I looked up to see that it was Flannery wearing only a towel.
"I hope I'm not bothering you master but I was hoping to join you if it was alright." she said.
"Of course you can, it's your hot spring to and more the better anyway." I replied.
"Great." she replied, cheerfully letting her towel drop to the floor showing me her curves before dipping her toe in the water to test it then sinking in to join me in the water.
"Master I have noticed you are stressed out." she said with concern in her voice.
"Yeah the tournament is coming up soon and I have never been a fan of the media," I replied.
"Don't be you're the strongest person I know and your peerage could easily beat whoever is unfortunate enough to tick anyone off," Flannery says confidently.
" It's not just that. After I'm married to Rias I'm not only going to become the next head of the house of Gremory but a few weeks after that I'm getting married to several goddess and Gabriel and while I'm glad to be marrying them I'll also being getting more responsibilities and It also means having to become the head for the Greece gods on Mt. Olympus," I said.
" Don't be your a great leader," Flannery said.
" Maybe but I still can't help myself but feel stressed," I told her.
"Then allow me to help you relieve your stress." Flannery says seductively as she put her hand on my cock and started stroking.
I couldn't help myself but moan in both surprise and pleasure. She then stopped and moved in front of me in order to get in a better position. Seeing what she desired I lifted myself out of the water and sat on the edge of the spring. Then she kissed my tip and started licking my rod while her hands played with my balls. She opened her mouth and started to take me in slowly while teasing my tip with her tongue.
I decided to speed things up a bit and grabbed her head to force her to take more of me in. I occasionally stopped so she can breath, it would seem rough to anyone watching but Flannery actually like it this way, and then put it back into her mouth until I came.
However I still wasn't satisfied and she could tell by looking at my hard on. I also could see that her switch had been flicked with the look of lust still present in her eyes. She maneuvered her way on top of me cowgirl style and started to bouncing up and down on top of me at her own rhythm. I just couldn't stop myself from looking at her breast, which were about an average size, following her movements. It was almost hypnotic. Flannery took noticed of this and smirked.
"You can do more than just look you know." she teased, knowing she had my undivided attention.
After she said this I immediately grabbed her breast and started to grope them making Flannery moan even more. Eventually I climaxed inside her causing her to climax as well but I wasn't done yet and Flannery could tell by looking at my eyes.
"How do you want me?" She asked.
I told her doggy style which she grinned at the idea. If it's one thing I know about my sexy fire dragoness is that while she may be a tease she loves it when I take charge. She then got to the edge and placed her arms elbows up on the side. Her pussy was glistening with excitement. I then placed my index finger inside her to get her ready. She started moan the moment my finger started to explore her pussy.
"Master, please put your thing in me I can't wait anymore." She begged.
I decided to give her what she wants and removed my finger so I could place my dick in her. I lined it up at her entrance and tease her with it as well earning more moans and complaints from Flannery. After a bit I decided that I had teased her enough and placed my rod in her and began thrusting. Her walls started to squeeze around my shaft giving me pleasure. I spanked Flannery's ass about ten times leaving some marks on it.
Eventually I came inside her after several minutes of thrusting. Soon after I came inside her she had an orgasim. Once we were finished we got out of the hot spring and then I pulled her to me and kissed her.
"Did I relive your stress master?" Flannery asked.
"Yes very much so, thank you my sexy fire dragoness." I replied .
"Anytime my sexy master."
Flannery left and changed back into her clothes while I was changing, but not before letting me see her shake her ass which I know she did on perhaps because of the smile on her face. I then finished getting changed and headed back to my room. I would need all the sleep I can get for the tournament tomorrow.
Peerage ( they are all mutated pieces except for xenovia and ravel)
Queen: Yasaka
Rook: Kuroka
Rook: Mirajane Straus
Knight: Erza Scarlet
Knight: Xenovia
Bishop: Ultear
Bishop: Ravel
Pawn: Kiyome Abe
Pawn: Le Fay
Pawn: Lavina ( she appears in slash dog and volume 21)
Pawn: Arcee her techno organic form is sometimes called Saddie
Pawn: Chromia her techno organic form is sometimes called Crystal ( On deviantart someone made a human pic of arcee based on the fanfic Only Human, that is what chromia's third form resembles just a bit older)
Pawn: Flare up her techno organic form is sometimes called Lauren( Her robot forms appearance is based off from the wings universe and her techno form has long hair with the same color as her armor)
Pawn: Samus Aran
Pawn : Sento Isuzu
Familars: Ryuuteimaru,Tiamat, Clair(Pokemon), Flannery(Pokemon), Cynthia(Pokemon), Cynder (The Spyro game series),Saphira( Inheritance Cycle),Virgo(fairy tail),Aquarius(Fairy tail), Kinanna(fairy tail), cortanna (halo 4), Bova Tannin and possibly the spectre dragon.
Harem: his peerage, his female familiars, rias, akeno, koneko, rosseweisse, asia, jeanne,reya, tubusa yura, irina, Gabriel , elmenhide, roygun belphegor, aphrodite, athena, artemis, Demeter, amaterasu, palutena, sylphy, and katsumi
