Hey, so I really hope this story doesn't ultimately fail, so I'll make it a bit like a choose your own adventure story. I'll write a chapter, then give you two options, whichever options get the most reviews I'll write. Updates will be every friday, just as a little treat to all y'all. I really liked a story I read a while back so this will be a take on it.

Disclaimer: Uncle Rick owns it. Not me. :(


Percy POV

"Faster daddy! faster!" My daddy and I are at the mall! I have to ride in a stroller though. Daddy has to push me around, but we wanted it to be fun! We're going to the aqua- aquawium later to look at fishies! I like fishies. My daddy owns all the fishies in the aquawium. I get to tawk to them all the time. My mommy says I look just like daddy. I have the same eyes she says. I hope mommy will bake cookies when we get home. I hope the cookies are blue, I love blue! Blue like waves, blue like the ocean...

Poseidon POV

"Percy and I are just stopping at the mall to grab a new filter." I speak softly, Percy fell asleep in the stroller and I don't want to wake him. "I'm baking cookies tonight!" my beautiful wife replies. "Oh, thank goodness. We're on a sugar shortage!" I reply chuckling. Who knew a six year old could eat so many cookies? I found 'Aquatics R' Us' and walked in. "Sorry, honey I have to go. There's some confusion down at the store." "I love you" "Love you too, bye" I presed the end call button and shut my cell phone. Ah, cell phones, I love you. I wasn't kidding when I said there was trouble down at the store. My biggest rival in the aquatics industry, Oceanus "Artie" Krabs, was standing at MY counter, threatening MY workers. I storm in, Percy's stroller in tow. "What do you think you're doing in my store Artie?" He slicks back his fiery red hair before cooly responding "Oh, just checking in on daddy warbucks and his income, it would be a shame if we found a health hazard in your store wouldn't it, Don?" Gee whiz I hate this guy. "Get out of my store. If you set one-" he cut me off, "threatening are we now? that is reportable..." I continued "-slimy foot in my store again, I'll call mother." Artie paled "You wouldn't." I should clarify, Artie is my older brother, he took mom's last name, I took Dad's. "I would, now get out of my store!" He retreated out the front doors. I turned to the cashier "Hey Rick, I'm here to pick up that filter." Rick retreated behind the counter. He bent down ever so slow and grasped a medium sized item. He pulled it up, shaking. "You shouldn't have come today..." Three gun shots were heard.

Rick's PoV

What have I done? I just killed my boss! I look down at the kid, he looks from me to the gun burning in my hands then to his limp father. "Daddy?" he pleads. "Please daddy, wake up! Help! Help somebody!" I couldn't be caught! I don't want to kill an innocent child! What to do... I whack the butt of my gun on the kid's head. He falls limp, a plume of blood dripping from his forehead. Not a death blow, just sinister.

A phone rings in Poseidon's pocket. I wonder who that could be. Oh well. And I leave my register for the last time.


So you kinda see what I'm trying to do.

Okay the options:

1.) Have a time skip and Percy wakes up, Annabeth is the assisstant helping

OR

2.) Have a chapter from 4 year old Annabeth's point of view. (A little surprise on Percy's role. You'll like it trust me.)

Review! Results in a week and it will be a longer chapter!

-mcjazzer

Ps. If you don't review I can't continue. No flames please!