Ok so this is like my first EVER fan fiction i ever created and i will like some nice feed back. i will really appreciate it.
" Stiles shout at Derek. Him and the rest of the pack we're in the newly renovated Hale house for their pack meeting and just found out about some very new (and impossible) information about an Alpha pack heading their way. "And you decided it was smart to tell us now!? What the HELL Derek!?" Stiles was furious and an unhappy Stiles was a very scary Stiles (he can really give Lydia a run for her money). The pack visibly flinches. Stiles gets up from his place in between Erica and Jackson on the couch to walk over to Derek and push him. Derek, being the rock he is, barley rocks back on his heels with his arms crossed over his chest.
"Stiles, may you please sit back down so I can finish explaining?" Derek says all to calmly. "Fine but, this better be a good reason or else I swear I will put you in your grave right now." Stiles growls before sitting back in his original place. Derek looks like he was uninfected by his threat but, there was still a hint of fear in his eyes that was quickly replaced by determination. "Ok, so, I just got a call from a pack in Washington saying the Alpha pack passed through their territory to give them an inspection of how their pack works. They passed but, just barley." The Pack looks and listens with interest. "There are five of them. First, there's Deucalion. He is the leader of their pack and he is the Alpha of all Alphas but, he likes to go by the name of "Demon Wolf." "Now, there is Kali. She killed her whole pack just to join the Alpha pack. She does not take shit from anybody and will kill you if you provoke her. Next is Ennis. I don't really know that much about him but, I know he is like the body guard of the pack. Now, the last two are your ages. Their names are Ethan and Aiden and they are Alpha twins. No one knows how they both got the power but, it happened. Ok, since I gave you a description of how they work and are here is the bad news. They don't like humans." Everyone turns to Stiles with various looks of concerns. Stiles looks at everyone in the eye then back to Derek to utter a "why?" Derek huffs a sigh "Because they see them as nothing and useless to any pack or humanity even. Now, Stiles I want you to have a detail with you all the time…" "What about Allison?" Scott asks Derek. Everyone turns to him like he is crazy. "She's a hunter dumb ass, she'll be fine." Erica says. Ever since Scott betrayed all of them and worked with Gerard to save his mom, everyone has been a little hesitant to talk to him again. Allison on the other hand, they don't like her. After, what she did to Boyd, Erica and Stiles no one talks to her. Not even Lydia. "Ok guys, enough." Lydia says. "Thank you Lydia. Now, someone answer this question…who wants to take the first shift?"
Somewhere in Washington
"So is everything ready?"
"Yes Deucalion, how many times do we have to say this?"
"Aiden, don't provoke him."
"Thank you Ethan. Now, Aiden you will answer my question with respect do you understand?"
"Yes."
"Good. Now Kali, go get Ennis and tell him to bring the car around. We have another pack to inspect."