What if Hinata was a prodigy from the very beginning? How would that change things? Strong/ Confident/ Cold Hinata. Strong and Smarter Naruto. NaruXHina rivalry?
"Speaking."
Thoughts
Kyunbi
Only a candle light lit the darkness in the deepest hours of time. The rain drops which fell upon the shape of her cheeks and the tears which were hidden deep within her eyes resurfaced on the cold cemented ground.
She peers up at the blacken sky, wondering why life was harsh and grim. They say life is supposed to be easier when you have those who support you like your family. Hinata debunked it.
She didn't have a family; she just has a government political system, nothing more, nothing less.
Every day you have to cater to their demands, or more specific, her father's demands. Every day it was the same, wake up, go train, do good, go to sleep. It was tiring, boring even, but she knew in order to protect her clans pride and not bring shame upon the clan, than she must stick to the program.
The broken girl stood up, not believing how hard it was raining. She didn't even realize, being caught up in her thoughts had caused her to lose focus of her surroundings.
She scowled herself for letting her thoughts get the better of her. What would've happened if she were on a mission and she got distracted again? It only takes one mistake in the shinobi world to end up dead.
Hinata sighs lowly as she walks the path she always walks to go home. The weather was depressing but some way, somehow, she found comfort in it. The rain, so as the star less night, always brought her hope that there were someone just as alone and hurt as she were. She deemed to even call herself selfish but, knowing there is someone else out there just like you, made her feel like she wasn't as alone anymore.
Still…she felt like all of her thoughts of her not being alone was a facade to cover up the fact that she is alone..no one would ever feel her pain and if they claim to, they won't understand it. No one would..no one ever could..
She ceased in her tracks, the wind blowing back her dark blue midnight locks as she peers up at the darken sky one last time to say. " I'm sorry…Okaasan."
Okkasan= Mother
So did you guys like it? I'm so nervous about making this story even though I know what direction I want to head in, it's still a job when you don't know what everyone likes. So before you get into my story I need to tell you a few things. Naruto is Hinata rival. Its original and I do not believe any one has ever done this before. She also is a true Hyuga like her father always wanted her to be, one who seals their emotions using "masks."
I'm planning on a lot of sad scenes, but there would be happy ones too, and yes this story is Naruhina, nothing else. Also I'm not sure about placing Naruto and Hinata on the same team but I might..just have to think about it. This first chapter is short because its prologue.
