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Today was going to be a new day for me. I wasn't going to let anyone bring me down neither was I going to crictize myself. So I smoothed my blond hair down one last time and stepped into the B.A.U elevator. By the next two floors it had picked up two new was a light skin african-american and the other a tall lanky caucasion who was in need of a serious haircut. They were having a mild discussion about some one named Gideon.
"Hey babygirl" the light skinned man tapped me lightly on the arm and pointed to the small buttons on the panel. "Could your press eight for me?"
It was one floor below the one I pushed, "No problem" I was cheesing on the inside still tingling from the string of electricity that his small touch had given me. Damn this man was fine. Hopefully I would see him around the building often.
A couple of floors later I had reached mine, heading directly to my office. Eager to see what I had to work with. Thisa place seriously rocked. The computers were completly amazing, and the technology was beyond the year of two thousand ten. I'd never seen much of it but I couldn't wait to delve my hand in ti all. I placed my bag under my new desk and signed into the database with the codes that I'd been given at orientation. I was told I'd be working mostly with Aaron Hotchner and his team and that they would call me whenever they had a case and I would probably travel iwth them from time to time.
I hadn't heard anything from them until a woman named JJ called me "Umm is this Penelope Garcia?"
"Yes at your service o dear one"
"Okay. I need you to track this license plate down. it's DOE21B"
I typed in the license plate description and seconds later got a match I read her the name and address and I was about to hand up when she introduced her self.
"This is JJ from Aaron Hotchner's team, I meant to meet you before hand but we got called in at last minute since the priority turned up a few notches from the last two murders. Have you heard of the Faceless Murders?"
I shivered from just hte thought about those murders "Yes they've been on every newspaper and news channel unforturnately. Just plain disgusting and sad"
JJ sighed "He's beginning to evolve when he killed the two last victims on the same day that means that his urge is growing--"
The shiver grew into a gag "Ohh JJ I really don't want to hear about this"
"Sorry I feel like Ried I didn't mean to get carried away"
"It's alright. I forgive you"
"Alright see ya"
No one called me all afternoon until around seven o clock I got a call from Ried.
"Princess of the light, what can I do for you today?" I greeted him.
"Who is this?" The man asked, confused.
"Penelope Garcia"
"I know you. Were you in the elevator earlier today?"
"Yes alongside many other people who use the elevator"
He chuckled, a low husky laugh that made me blush. I knew who he was now.
"Yeah I know who you are"
"Do you memorize everyone's voice or am I just special?" I bit into my knuckle thinking about how I shouldn't be flirting with this man. Oh but he started it!
"No I don't just the really cute ones. But hey I called you abotu work, not to flirt. You can't be distracting me girl"
"I can't help myself" I said sarcastically.
That made him laugh even more "I need you--"
"Three words I always wanted to hear from a hot guys mouth--"
"Girl! I need you to look for an abandoned building it'll be distanced from the city and it'll be brown"
"Specifically brown or...?"
"He's compulsive he won't be able to work in any other color, he's so desperate that he would probably paint it himself"
"Sicko. Okay I'll e-mail the results to your phones pronto"
"Wait! What's your name? I'm Derek Morgan by the way"
"My name is Penelope Garcia but the world will soon know me by The Greatest Computer Genius That Ever Lived"
"Long title"
"You'll learn to get used to it. Good luck "
The next day they'd still hadn't cracked the case but by JJ's describings they were pretty darn close.
"We found the ware house but he cleared out pretty fast. He took his eight hostages with him too. What do you know of Demoralization of the mind Garcia?" Dr. Ried had called me as soon as I had signed in.
I took a sip of my cappachino "An awful lot. More than I even wanted to know any how why?"
"DoM is what our on-Sub believes in it's a possibility that he was in a experiment before. And for this amount of trauma to make him snap he had to be put into a severe one. I'll like you to look up DoM experiments using young men. Around eightteen to twenty five in the recent years."
"What about universities when I was in college they did two on campus. Two of my friends did it and quit the third day came crying home like babies. Tough boys I wouldn't have lasted three hours without my lap top and my George Clooney poster"
"You know not to many people can they're psy--"
"Ried!" a man yelled in the background. We went over what he wanted me to look over again and he hung up and I sent the results that I had found. I was beginning to see a nice pattern.
Two hours later they had found the guy and six of the eight hostages were saved. Win some you lose some they say, but I knew it had to be hard on the team. Since they were only two cities away they would be home in the matter of a couple of hours. JJ had said she wanted to meet me in the cafeteria.
She called me around four saying she had arrived. I logged out and hung my purse from my shoudler. JJ wasn't sitting alone, beside her was the cutie Derek, Morgan, Ried, Gideon and Aaron Hotchner.
"Welcome to the tem" Ried beamed "Don't be so nervous we don't bite"
"I'm not nervous" I lied.
"Yes you are. Your shoulders are very stiff, your playing with the rings on your finger, also your biting your lip. All signs of nervousness"
"Ried will you be quiet and let the girl sit down?"
Ried blushed red and sat down. I sat across from JJ, Derek and Prentiss.
"Nice to meet you finally" JJ said to me.
"Same here"
"Where did you get that shirt at? Bloomingdales?" Prentiss asked holding half of a ham sandwich inches from her mouth.
I nodded "My third time shopping there. And last. They totally suck budget wise"
"I know, I know but that sweater your wearing is what I want but they are always sold out" Prentiss complained.
"No store is ever sold out of my size." I boasted proudly, I wasn't ashamed of my weight at all. I wasn't obese and I wasn't going to hide my beautiful shape any longer.
"Why don't you just order it online? That's what I usually do I don't have time o go shopping" Hotchner pitched in.
Prentiss rolled her eyes mad at herself "How could I not think of that? Some agent I am"
"So you transfered right? What happened for you to move here?" Gideon asked, I had heard he was the most direct he laid his hands before him like a tent on the table. Everyone at the table stared at me wanting to know what I'd done.
"I didn't do anything bad. Actually I did good. Real good your people begged for me honey begged.
"You must be the best at what you do" Derek said, totally staring me down.
"Nothing less. I thought we had this discussion before Derek" I said bantering.
"I forgot about your title for a second"
"I'll just have to work twice as hard to make your remember"
"Cocky"
"This coming from the man who claims he can don fifty pushups in one minute" Aaron added humorlessly.
"Did you just make a joke?" Gideon asked, looking as if he had misheard him. I guess Aaron wasn't the team joker.
"I can be funny" He said meekly. Aaron wiped his mouth and stood up. "I have some paperwork to attend to. Garcia? I look forward to working with you"
"Me too"
"Workaholic" Prentiss mumbled when Aaron left.
"All of us are if you--" Ried started
"Ried, come on now" Prentiss interrupted.
"Okay, okay"
I cut this short. Since I wanted to revise the rest. Thank you for reading. Review please.