Ok, this is a early fanfiction I wrote. Please do not judge my writing by this if you think it is bad lol. I just wanted to put it on to see what people think. So here is the first chapter.

As Uzamaki Naruto looked face to face at Pain, his anger reached an intensity that he had never felt before. Hyuga Hinata had given her life to save Naruto's life and was impaled with Pain's chakra spikes. As he witnessed this with his own two eyes, Naruto's mind began to scream to the Nine Tails for more power. Deep inside his mind, the Nine Tails began to feed the boy more and more power, hoping the boy would reach his limit and it could make a hasty retreat. But as this occurred, the opposite began to happen. The Nine Tails began to feel itself absorb into Naruto's being, all of its power being constantly drained by the boy. As the Nine Tails began to lose all of its power, it began to sink deep into Naruto's subconscious. Naruto began to feel the strength of all of the Nine Tails in his body and it was overwhelming him physically. His muscles began to shred to pieces and his skin began to thin and tear away. His eyes became a blood red and his pupils became slit. Naruto's teeth became fang like and sharp. A dark red aura was covering Naruto from head to toe. Pain looked at him as he analyzed the situation. He began to realize that this wasn't what was supposed to happen. The nine tails wasn't supposed to fuse with its host. And as Pain seen the boy's strength was growing exponentially. The boy had to be disposed of, and quickly. As all of the other ninjas looked on, Naruto's transformation began to get deeper and deeper into the Nine Tails. Outside of this area, a sickly looking man sat in a chair, his eyes closed. A blue haired woman stood next to him. Suddenly, the man's eyes snapped open. The girl looked up at him.

"Nagato, what is wrong?" the girl said, a worried expression on her face. The man looked down and began to ball his fist.

"It's over," Nagato said, looking at the girl. "Konan, I'm going to use it." Konan didn't hold back any shock on her face.

"It has gone that far?"

Nagato nodded, and closed his eyes once again. Konan wanted to say something, but didn't. She stood there in silence as Nagato controlled Pain in the battlefield. The Pain then closed his eyes and they suddenly snapped wide open. As the demon Naruto began to stabilize, Pain activated his Rinniagan and used its secret technique. "God's Fury!" With this active, a portal appeared in front of the demon Naruto, and began to suck him in. The demon Naruto used his claws to try to not get sucked in, but the portal's strength was too strong. Naruto was sucked into the portal and it was closed behind him. After using this jutsu, Nagato lost contact with the Pain and the Pain fell to the ground. Konan began to shake Nagato as he fell unconscious.

"Nagato!" Konan screamed. He sat there, his eyes bleeding deeply. Haruno Sakura went to the area where Naruto once stood; looking at the ground he once stood on. She began to cry soft tears at the loss of her teammate and friend. As Naruto fell through dimensions, his body began to stabilize and return back to normal. As this was happening, a dark figure appeared and grabbed Naruto's hand. And that is where the story truly begins…

Naruto slowly woke up, his head spinning as he tried to sit up. "Oww!" Naruto groaned, grabbing his stomach. He looked down and seen his entire body wrapped in bandages. "Dam, what happened, Naruto murmured, scratching his head. "Ahh, you are awake, young warrior, a voice said. Naruto looked over and saw a small blue man walk into the room. Naruto jumped up from his covers and ran into a corner.

"What the hell are you supposed to be?" Naruto cried, shivering in a corner.

"Calm down, the blue man said, walking towards Naruto. "Hey you stay away from me smurf boy or ill… Naruto paused and looked around. He wasn't in Konoha. Naruto stood up straight and looked at the blue man.

"Alright, weirdo. Either you tell me why the hell I'm not in front of Pain right now and kicking his sorry ass or I'm going to kick your sorry ass!" The blue man smiled and looked directly at him. Naruto cringed a bit, feeling as if the man was staring directly into his soul. The man put his arms behind his back.

"Well, first allow me to introduce myself," the man said. "I am the Supreme Kai, watcher over the many worlds here in our galaxy. I am sorry to inform you, but you are no longer in this "Konoha". You have entered into my dimension and I rescued you from falling into the abyss. Naruto stood there, looking at the man.

"This is bullshit! How the fuck are you going to tell me I'm not in Konoha? How the hell did I get here then? And where is Pain?" The Supreme Kai shrugged and brushed off the questions. Naruto growled and walked up to the man and tried to grab him. Suddenly, a red faced man appeared instantly and bitch slapped Naruto into a wall. The man instantly appeared in front of Naruto and held him in a choke hold against the wall.

"Please Kibito, let him be," the blue man said. "This is all quite new to him at this point."

"That is not the point my lord," the man called Kibito said. "He was going to attack you and I neutralized him." "Unnecessary," the Supreme Kai said. He turned to Naruto. "You have great potential, young warrior. But your anger and foolhardiness is shadowing your abilities. You must learn to suppress these emotions when it is needed." Naruto giggled and pushed Kibito off him. "Look, obviously you don't know who I am. I am Uzamaki Naruto, future Hokage and ultimate ninja. I…."

"Will never become this Hokage," the Supreme Kai said. "You lack suck simple finesse that it's almost irritating. This "Hokage" sounds like an important job am I right?" "Yes!" Naruto shouted. "It means you're the village champion. The best of the best, the cream of the crop….."

"And you think that this is you!" the Supreme Kai shouted. "You have the right morals and values, but you sit here and act like such a fool!"

"Look I didn't ask you OK!" Naruto shouted back. "Just let me go back to my world and I won't be in your hair anymore."

"I'm afraid it's not that easy, the Supreme Kai said. "Currently, you are unable to return."

"Dammit!" Naruto shouted. "This is bullshit!"

Ok, so that is the beginning. I just got an accessible computer and everything so this is my attempt at a fanfiction, a earlier one I wrote a year back. So tell me how you like it and if I should continue it. THANK YOU!