Auther's mistake

Mistakes were made. I never realised that people had actually reviewed and followed this story and so I had taken it down because I wasn't to happy with the story. Gmail has finally alerted me to the reveiws and stuff and so im putting this back up. Hopefully you guys who have supported this story will be able to find it again and will continue writing. Luckily I didn't delete the story from my Doc Manager so its all still the original.

I got a new story guys. There will be more fighting in this one (not much though since I can't write about it at all) but not lots. I hope you will enjoy this like my other one ((The Legend of Spyro: A hero reborn)if you haven't read it).

Chapter 1: Raid

The sun sunk behind the distant mountains. The clouds turned orange, then slowly, to pink before finally turning into its usual dark grey colour.

"Isn't it beautiful," a soft sigh escaped her lips.

"Yeah it is," he agreed, "but not as beautiful as you, Cynder."

The couple were sitting on a grassy hill in the valley of Avalar, Spyro's wing draped carelessly over his companion.

With the loss of the sun, the gentle wind that had been refreshing before suddenly became a chilly breeze.

"We should get back, Spyro."

"Lead the way, Cynder."

Two dragons soared through the air, feeling free for the first time since Malfor's defeat mere days ago. After the two heroes had defeat the dark master, Spyro had used his last reserves of energy to save the world. The resulting outcome had been them getting shot out of the top of the volcano they were in and landing into a rather deep lake. Luckily they hadn't broken any limbs and had been able to scramble to shore. A river lead them from the lake into familiar land, the valley of Avalar, where they had sought refuge at the cheetah's had been welcomed with open arms and lots of cheering.

Spyro and Cynder spiraled down from the night sky. The moon was hidden behind thick clouds and only a few stars lit up the sky, making it almost impossible to see much. The light from the village drew them like moths to a flame. Their claws scraped across the ground, it quite masking the sound of the friendly greetings from the villagers. The two dragons made their way to the place they called home, a small hut at the edge of the village.

"Hey, Spyro, What is that?" Cynder raised a claw into the sky.

At first, nothing could be seen. Then, a green light flared up in the midst of the dark clouds. The light disappeared just as quickly as it flared up.

"I don't kno—"

A horn blew.

"Something's wrong, Cynder, stay by me ok?."

Cynder nodded and Spyro ran to where chief Prowlus was standing, sword unsheathed, ready for anything.

Shadows moved just outside the fire light while the village got ready.

The green light that they had seen earlier appeared again, making a steady descent towards them. The light seemed to glint off scales.

Creatures suddenly ran into the light, holdings various weapons. They looked like dragons but walked on two legs and didn't have wings.

The villages rallied to the chief's battle cry and ran to join the fight. The two dragons stayed back as the green light made its way towards them.

A adult dragon walked towards them, a chain around her neck holding a green gem that pulsed with a harsh green light. Just looking at it made Spyro feel weaker. It seemed familiar.

"General, we have another one," she turned back to them, a sinister smile met their

growls, "hello, I am Aurora. I'm here to take you away young female."

"Not happening," Spyro called back to her.

Aurora seemed to register him for the first time, "if only you could stop me."

Another one of the weird creatures came up to Aurora, more creatures behind it.

They brought a chain along with them.

The reptile with the chain walked towards the two, "now now, step aside and no one will get hurt."

Spyro's tail slashed across its leg.

With a long sigh Aurora told her minions, "go get her for me."

Chief prowlus looked up, the enemy were too numerous to fight. Bit by bit, the defenders were forced back lest they be overwhelmed. He prayed to whatever deity he worshipped.

The battle commenced. The reptiles barreled towards them, weapons raised. Spyro and Cynder were the opposition, with Spyro protecting the one he loved. The outcome was inevitable. Cynder blew a gale force wind at them as they tried to dodge Spyro's fire.

"Well, we can't have you using your powers against powerless people," Aurora called to the opposition.

The green gem around her neck flared brightly and Spyro's fire was cut off quickly, soon followed by Cynder's wind.

"Wait what?" The surprised sound in his voice was enough to make Aurora chuckle, "what did you do to us?"

"Dear dragon, don't you know what this is? You did after all destroy it's previous owner."

Cynder's voice was shaking, "it's from Gaul's staff."

"Exactly," Aurora purred, "And you know exactly what it does too.

The enemies, who up until then had watched the byplay between their mistress and her targets, resumed the conflict. Spyro swung his tail in a wide arc making them retreat.

"Now, I'm getting tired of this," Aurora called to Spyro.

A gust of air blew Spyro back.

"Spyro!" Cynder cried out.

The reptiles ran at her.

Spyro got to his feet but couldn't move as a strong wind blew him back. Looking up, he saw Aurora letting out the wind.

"How can you do that?" Spyro's voice was strained as he thought a losing battle against the wind.

Cynder's tail knocked down one enemy and her claws made another jump back. Something heavy landed on her from behind and she fell to the ground. Shackles were attached to her legs and tail then a leather strap wasput over her mussel to stop her from talking.

"I was once Malefor's servant," Aurora answered Spyro's question, "I learned a few tricks when I was with him."

Spyro used that brief moment to run and free Cynder. Spyro jumped in the air to land on the general who was standing over Cynder when an especially strong gust of wind caught under his wings and fringed him high into the air.

The general tugged on the chain Cynder was attached to. Cynder didn't budge, her eyes still looking at Spyro desperately flying back to her.

She had a sad smile on her face.

Cynder was lifted into the air as Aurora picked her up with her talons.

"No, Cynder!" Spyro called to her, "don't worry, I will find you. I will find you and bring you safely back."

Spyro flew straight at Aurora. She blew back at him. Spyro fell back to earth and looked helplessly as Cynder unwillingly got taken. She squirmed in her grasp but the powerful adult dragon held onto her.

The dragon took off.

The reptiles they had been battling all ran out into the night.

Ok, first of all, I know I'm trash at writing fighting scenes. I know Cynder didn't do much talking during battle. The first chapter is always the hardest though because you have to set the scene (which I hope I did at least) which is tricky.

There is another thing I'm bad at too, and that's thinking of names. I can't think of names at all and I would appreciate any suggestions (I will give you credit for it). Please review or PM me if you have any questions or just want to tell me how good I did (or bad) and I'll be getting onto the next chapter.