Twin spires A/N i have no clue why i wrote this. anyways i want to know which version people find is better so just leave a review saying which you liked better and if possible why and/or how to improve either or both of them.
version 1 Twin spires Created of ice Built to inspire Shining bright in the moonlight Fierce. Imposing. Majestic. Bold.
Made to protect, an enternal guardian Wind dance with ice and snow A lonly soul lies within Never seen.
Until the day hope, memmories, dreams and wonder call.
To stand against the nightmares tall.
for without him all will fall.

Version 2 Twins spires Created if ice Built to inspire Shining in the light of day Bold. Imposing. Majestic. Fierce.
Made to protect, an immortal guardian.
Wind dancing with snow and ice.
A lonly soul lies within Never to be heared. never to be seen.
Until the day hope, dreams, memmories and wonder call.
To stand agians the nightmares strong. for without him all will fall.