Title:
just tell me why?
Author: ritsu-sensei
Category:sweat drop sg1
Hi mina, howre ya? Yeah im fine, thx!!! XD
I always liked to write a fiction about them…like hell, I mean them, Danny & jack, theyre so damn cool and yeah Danny is sexy!!! drooling
Im in love with Danny cuz he's so kind and lovely and just jack knows how soft he is!!! drooling like a waterfall
Ok, blah is enough, were here to read a fiction about them, and just guess…yeah,its angst!!! dancing around the room
Maybe
my other fiction will be with humor cuz I wanna write some humor
about them too, but for now…just angst…so go and find some
tissues box for
now!!!
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NOTE: I don't own this sg1, maybe sometimes…maybe…then just god can help them!!! laughing as im a sadistic pervert
"I
love you jack…I really love you…"
Damn
you, goddamn you Daniel!!!
you told me that you loved me, you told
me that you liked to be with me, you told me you liked to kiss me and
goddamn you told me you love me, why you lied to me?
You
told me you liked me…but why you told that fucking thing just once?
Why didn't you say that to me again? Why did you just looked at me
and smiled and said:
"I know you can't be with me jack, I
know…but I just like to tell you my feeling…"
then you
left me and then…that fucking mission…why you done that fucking
work? Why you always liked to rescue humans? Why you always like to
help them and what the hell you though you were? An
angel?!
but…yes…you were an angel…you were kind, pretty and
soft…always made me smile…always made me feel that I just like to
be with you forever but I couldn't show you my feeling…cuz I was a
fucking selfish guy…not as you…you were an angel!!!
-damn you
Daniel…goddamn you…why did you leave?
Now, I'm in your
room…lonely and heartbroken…you left me alone to suffer!
Why?
Just what the hell you though? Why Danny…why you sacrificed
yourself? What about me? Didn't you think that I needed you so
badly? What about your life? Didn't you think that you WOULD live
longer than anyone in this world? Just answer me Daniel…why you
lied to me?!
-I didn't lied jack…
See?
now Im going crazy…I can hear you after your funeral!!!
-youre
not crazy jack…im here…for you!!!
I looked up in surprise and
found you by myself…my eyes were wet and I could see your body
blurry…but I could see you smiling softly like the
past:
-Daniel…but…
-yes,im
dead jack…but they let me come and see you whenever I want…they
let me be with you jack…and im here for you!!!
you hug me…I
can feel your warmth and your smell…you smell like a rose…like a
rare flower:
-Daniel…why you lied to me?
you smile again and
wipe away my tears:
-I told you jack that I loved you…but you
yelled at me and sent me out of your room…but I knew you were under
the pressure cuz of your feelings about sara…I knew you were still
in love with her!!!
I looked at him, looked at my dear Daniel…my
angel, and then kissed him, kissed his lips softly and he answered my
lips…he tasted like sweet meats…he was really sweet!!!
-jack…I
have to leave…but I promise to you that I'll be back soon...
I hugged him tight and kissed him again…this time, I forced my lips to his and forced him to answer me…I just don't like to let him go right now:
-jack…plz!
I let him go and
he smiled again:
-goodnight for now jack…I'll be back soon, wait
for me!!!
-I love you danny…plz, come back soon!!!
You smiled
and then disappeared….
Doctor
Jonathan sighed and closed his notebook and smiled to him:
-very
well done jack, you wrote a really good story…now, tell me how you
are?
Jack was in his usual white clothes…and looked woozy like
the other days:
-he
was here last night!!!
Jonathan smiled again and patted his
shoulder:
-its really good jack, plz tell me if he'll come here
this night again, ok?
Now jack looked suspended:
-why do you
want to meet him?
-I had never seen an angel
before!!!
-oh…then…Ok, I will tell ya this time!!!
A nurse
entered the room and helped jack to stand up:
-now jack…time to
sleep!!!
-but Daniel will come!!!
The nurse smiled and helped
him to go to his room:
-he will wake you up when he'll come, so
go to bed for now…ok?
-ok…
Jonathan
sighed again and looked at her:
-im sorry Sam!!!
Sam wiped
away her tears and tried hard not to cry again:
-maybe another
time he'll notice you…
-maybe…
How was my first sg1s fiction? Suck? Thanks a lot!!! .;;;
R&R
plz to show me how was my fiction!!!
THANKS ALOTE FROM MOMMY
LARISA TO EDITED THIS FICTION,
LOVE & FLOWER FOR MY MOMMY!!! hugs her tight
OWARI
