hi this is my first story and i want to know what you think
back story
Elbey was the girl in class that no one really knew anything about, she was quiet and kept herself to herself. Elbey was living a life where she had to fend for herself and her little brother while her mother was off somewhere and rarely home, while going to school she also looks after her brother (and mother when she is at home), she also has a night job cleaning the local indoor playarea for children, whilst she is at work her next door neighbour looks after her brother who's name is Benny-Jo. This story is the story of how she cope with life and finally meets someone who will be there for her and how Elbey finally lets her walls down and learn to trust this person and how they make a life together
