This is my story so please be nice with the critique! You know what!? NO! Be as tuff as you want to with the critique! I'm am not a baby! So yeah!
"HEY IGGY! OPEN UP!" Said America as he banged on England's while he was still being careful not to break it. " don't call me by that name you git! It's either Arthur or England! Now what do you want!?" England said quite irritably. " I'm bored now lets go watch a movie!" America said enthusiastically hoping his friend would say yes. "no i have better things to do than to watch one of your movies." Said the english man. " aw c'mon Iggy- i mean England!" America corrected. "it'll be fun!" America gave England puppy eyes AndEngland sighed in defeat. " fine you git i will go." "YYYYYAAAAAYYY" England jumped at the americans sudden outburst. " just let me grab my jacket and my wallet." England said as he went to do just that. just as he was walking out he saw that america was deep in thought about what to watch. " what movie are we going to watch anyways?" "Oh you'll see!" At that they started walking and England silently hoped that it wouldn't be something stupid.
