I am attempting to write a Detective Conan fan fiction. I still don't have a clue on how long I want it to be. This fan fiction takes place during the early episodes of Detective Conan after the little incident Shinichi had with his parents in disguise. Creative Criticism and Feedback are well appreciated,
He with the Pen Name of Antonius McMichael.
"Oh Shinichi, it is extremely dangerous to leave you here in Japan," said the very worrisome mother. The little child was determined to stay and trail down those who have caused such horrific shame to be placed on his name. "I am sorry mother, but there is no way I plan on remaining in this form," replied the child. The mother, Yukiko Kudo, hugged her son with intense passion, "but it is so incredibly cute." Yusuke Kudo, the father, scratched his head and sighed, "What a stubborn son we have. We will let you stay but under one condition. A bodyguard will be assigned to protect you 24/7. Don't worry, son. There is no one more trustworthy on this green Earth than him, Keitaro Tokoshima."
The child was astonished and surprised, "Tokoshima-san! I haven't seen him since I was a child! What has he been up to?" Yusuke was glad that his son discontinued the argument, "A long time indeed. Tokoshima, using several aliases, has been doing some detective work all over the world. I have already contacted him, and he has accepted this role, but it's surprising really, my old butler becoming a detective that could even put Sherlock Holmes to shame." Shinichi accepted this condition. He bid farewell to his parents who were about to return overseas.
Shinichi was eagerly waiting the man he respected immensely as a child. In the airport, a man came behind the little child, "Kudo-sama, it has been a long time." Shinichi turned around to see the White Butler, as Shinichi's father called him. The child smiled, "Tokoshima! I've been expecting you!" Tokoshima bowed in loyalty, "It is an absolute honor for me to serve you once again, Kudo-sama." The loyal twenty-seven year old was wearing a white suit, a black tie, a pair of white gloves, and a pair of pitch black shoes. They entered his black Benz that he prepared beforehand.
"Let's talk business now, Kudo-sama. Professor Agasa-dono, as well as Yusuke Kudo-sama and Yukiko Kudo-sama, has briefed me on your current situation. I have already planted my eyes and ears across the fields. We only need to wait for the harvest. In the meantime, I plan on staying with you, Kudo-sama. I've been informed that you're currently living with Ran Mouri-sama and her father, Detective Kogoro Mouri-dono. I have been also informed that you've been using Kogoro Mouri-sama as a mean to solve cases, and that that has been made possible by the equipment prepared for you by Professor Agasa-dono. I plan on asking Kogoro Mouri-sama for a job as a butler and an assistant detective. I am pretty sure he will find the fact that I expect no payment from him quite jaw-dropping. Using an alias and a disguise would be pointless, for it is very likely that Ran Mouri-sama remembers me from her childhood days."
Tokoshima applies the brakes of his wondrous black Benz. "Kudo-sama, it seems that we have reached our destination, Mouri Detective Agency" said the sophisticated butler. Shinichi was amazed, "You really have planned well for this." Tokoshima quickly replied as they were getting out of the car, "Of course, everything for Kudo-sama." They slowly climbed the stairs discussing the good old days. Both of them were laughing to their heart's content. Ran, looking for Conan, heard his laughs and quickly opened the door. "Conan-kun! Where have you been all this time! You made me so worried!" Ran began to notice the handsome figure standing next to Conan.
She was shocked as she said "Aren't you?" Tokoshima removed his hat. "It has been a long time, Mouri-sama." Ran quickly held his shirt angrily, "excuse me, Tokoshima-san, but tell me where Shinichi is!" Tokoshima took out his white napkin from his pocket and wiped some sweat on his forehead, "Calm down, Mouri-sama. I do not have the slightest clue. I am no longer in the service of the Kudos. I currently serve the Edogawas." Ran calmed down, "Oh, so you're Conan-kun's butler now?" Tokoshima took out his business card which stated that he is the butler of the Edogawas. "Yes, I am the loyal servant of Edogawa-sama. I was taking care of their house in their absence, but they have decided to rent the house, and now I've been assigned to serve Conan Edogawa-sama, and my orders also include serving you, Mouri-sama, as well as your father.
May I meet your father and give him this business proposal?" Ran allowed him in, "sure, please come in." Ran shut the door behind her. The next thing she notices was her father screaming in disbelief. "Are you kidding?" replied the drunk detective. Tokoshima was bowing to Mouri in respect. "Yes, great detective. I expect no payment, but please let me live with your family. The truth is I aspire to become a detective, and I know that living with the Great Detective of Eastern Japan, Mouri Kogorou-dono will make my dream a reality." Mouri laughed in a drunken manner. "You will become a great detective, Keitaro-kun, second only to me!" Tokoshima then stood from the sofa he was sitting on. "Well then, I will get some of my things from the car, if you don't mind, Mouri-dono." Tokoshima walked towards the door where Conan was standing. He whispered to the child-looking adult as he opened the door. "What's your first command, Kudo-sama?"
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