Disclaimer: I don't own The Patriot or its characters. Only Caelin Jacobs, Pvt Griggs, Cpl Schaeffer and more when they appear.
Due to J.B's suggestion, I rewrote the beginning so I reposted it. Hope you like this one more!
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Caelin started packing up her dj equipment since her gig was over. Still filled with excitement, she didn't notice someone staring at her with hatred. She looked up and noticed a friend of hers walking towards her. "Hi, Jeff. How are you?"
"I'm good;
I see you got started as a mobile jock. How're you liking that?"
"It's pretty cool, but I'd still prefer to be a radio
jock, but hey, I got an internship over in Milwaukee which is
awesome."
"Congrats! That's great. You sure
deserve it after waiting for so long."
"Thanks Jeff,
I appreciate it. Want to walk out to my car with me?"
"Nah, sorry, I got some beer that's calling me name. "
"Okay dokay."
She walked out to the car and put her things in it.
"What? Where am I??? What is this place?" Caelin muttered to herself as she struggled through some tall weeds, or so she thought. Having reached a clearing by a stream she knelt and drank some water. "Man, this is weird. Hey, there's my car, that's good at least. I wonder if it's ok."
Her car was all right, as was her dj equipment and things she had bought for the after Easter sale.
She got in and started driving until a large field blocked her way. She got out and surveyed the land. Quickly seeing that she'd have to go through the field, she investigated to see how thick the brush was. It was too thick for her car and she figured that she would just go through it and then see what was on the other end. She grabbed some of her equipment and some candy and locked her car securely and started walking.
