Hello everyone this is my first fanfic, so can you please review this first chapter and tell me what you think? It would mean alot to me and I would love to know what I could do to improve this story. I have put a high rating on this because I feel it is appropriate, or at least it will be for later chapters. Thankyou, enjoy and please review! :)
Help.
Darkness. It surrounded him like a thick blanket. But, it wasn't comforting like a blanket, something that kept him warm, it was disturbing and cold. He could feel himself shivering slightly and started to bring his arms up and around his waist, but was held back by the wire that was binding his wrists together. Where was he? Why was he here? Who had bought him here? Greg sat there, feeling the panic slowly creep up inside of him, causing him to breath unusually fast. He needed to calm down or he knew he would hyperventilate and most likely pass out, and that's the last thing he needed, being unconcious in a strange, mysterious place with God knows who! And being blindfolded. He had been to busy trying to figure out where he was that he hadn't realised it was the blindfold blocking out his light. Trying to regulate his breathing, Greg thought about what he last remembered. Everything was foggy and as Greg was thinking he frowned in confusion. Why was it so hard to remember? And why did his head hurt? His head hurt. Another frown of confusion found its way onto Greg's face as he brought both hands up to his head and felt around for the source of the pain. In just a few seconds he found something that worried him greatly, dry blood. It was crusty and he followed the trail down the side of his face and onto his shirt. Not only did the fairly decent amount of blood loss from his new head wound worry him, the fact that it was dry worried him more. How long had he been there? And why couldn't he remember anything? Greg needed help.
I know it's very short, but I want to get a feel of what people think of how i'm starting this story. So, please review! I will try to update this story regularly, so if you would like to hear more about what's happened to Greg, keep coming back and checking for an update :) In the next chapter there will be more writing and a little bit of action! Please review, tell me what you think, and tell me if you think this story is worth carrying on :) AbiDabi
