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Chapter One
Jude Harrison sat quietly by the window, softly strumming the guitar that sat in her lap. She paused to admire the morning sun coming up over the trees and sighed. It's mornings like this, she thought, with a smile, that make me love the countryside. Her peaceful moment was ruined by the sound of yelling outside her door. Jude out down her guitar and opened the door.
"What's all this noise about?" she yelled, as she watched her two younger sisters struggle. "Give it to me, Karma," Patsy growled in frustration. Jude spied a piece of paper in Karma's hand and snatched it from her. "It says there's going to be a Mr. Mills coming into town," Jude read aloud. "And he's going to be staying at the old mansion in Nethersfield Park." "But you haven't gotten to the best part!" Karma chimed out, starting to dance around the room. "What's she talking about?" Jude asked Patsy, who rolled her eyes and walked away.
"He's coming to the town gathering tonight," a voice called out in reply. Jude turned to see her oldest sister, Sadie, enter the room and she smiled. Sadie brought this peace wherever she went, and it had a calming effect on everyone. Jude sat next to her and patted her hand. "I'm guessing Mother's found out," she replied. Sadie nodded. "Well, at least she picked a rich one this time, instead of a loser with a title," Jude said, with a little smile. "Jude," Sadie reprimanded, trying to keep her smile from showing.
"Jude, Sadie, are you in here?" a voice yelled as it entered the room. "Mother, what is it?" Jude replied, rolling her eyes. Victoria Harrison was by far the most annoying mother on the face of the earth. Besides the fact that she was always meddling in her daughters' love lives, she had a bad habit of saying the wrong things at the wrong times. "Good, there you are. I need you two to go upstairs and get ready for the gathering. Jane, please try to do something with that… mop Jude calls hair." Jude turned to say something, but Sadie pushed her out of the door before she could. "Jude," Sadie said, with a reassuring smile. "Don't worry, you'll look great. Better than she will, at least." They both laughed as they headed up to Sadie's room.
