Me: Aloha, readers! I feel like writing a small poem for Naruto, about Deidara's relationship with Tobi, after Sasori-san dies. ^^ If you like, umm...I guess push that friendly green/white button below the story and gimme some feedback! =D

Horrible Disclaimer: Unfortunately, I do not own Naruto; Masashi Kishimoto does, so I can't take the credit for the characters.


The Tides

It's like the tides at the beach

Rising and falling with each moment

Nature's own perfect beauty

And yet, little understand it

Sometimes, it will recede to the point

Where return looks utterly impossible

And sometimes, it will rise to the point

Where it is surprisingly consumed

By the unbreakable bonds

Between the sea,

The sand,

The people.


Me: Mm, I was bored, and Deidara and Tobi suddenly popped into my mind. Please, I NEED constructive criticism, with this being my first poem on FanFiction and whatnot. =J Personally, I think it was odd.

-Peachuz =B