Me: Aloha, readers! I feel like writing a small poem for Naruto, about Deidara's relationship with Tobi, after Sasori-san dies. ^^ If you like, umm...I guess push that friendly green/white button below the story and gimme some feedback! =D
Horrible Disclaimer: Unfortunately, I do not own Naruto; Masashi Kishimoto does, so I can't take the credit for the characters.
The Tides
It's like the tides at the beach
Rising and falling with each moment
Nature's own perfect beauty
And yet, little understand it
Sometimes, it will recede to the point
Where return looks utterly impossible
And sometimes, it will rise to the point
Where it is surprisingly consumed
By the unbreakable bonds
Between the sea,
The sand,
The people.
Me: Mm, I was bored, and Deidara and Tobi suddenly popped into my mind. Please, I NEED constructive criticism, with this being my first poem on FanFiction and whatnot. =J Personally, I think it was odd.
-Peachuz =B
