i'm really disappointed in this fic.

really really.

i dont think i got the whole idea that inspired the story across very well, but its good enough. i really needed something to get me going again, and i think this did it... i hope, at least.

but anyways, enjoy...

Heero POV


Invisible

Prologue

It was a brutal battle.

Me against at least a dozen mobile dolls.

I knew Wing ZERO could handle it, and I knew I'd defeat them—failure wasn't an option—just it was hell getting to the end of the fight.

Wielding my beam saber and shield, I spun on my heel to slice down yet another Taurus.

I hardly had time to brace myself as a blast from behind knocked my Gundam to the ground, taking several tall, ancient trees with it.

I was up in an instant, refusing to give the enemy even the slightest chance.

I could see sparks flying through the sides of the monitors before me; Wing ZERO was in worse shape than I had thought. I'd have to end this battle soon...

With a cry, I stabbed my pointed shield into a mobile doll, slicing through another with my beam saber a moment later. This was hell. I should've brought Duo with me on this mission. I hadn't known I would've been so outnumbered. I hadn't known it would've been this dangerous.

Okay.

Stay calm.

Seven down, five to go.

Almost mission complete.

Eight down, four to go.

I was on the ground again as the last four mobile dolls ganged up on me. But I managed to rise and destroy one of them.

Three more.

I can do this.

I cannot fail. I will not fail. Mission failure means suicide, and I can't die yet.

I jumped back to create some distance between me and my enemies, before racing forward, ready to strike.

The Taurus fell in a shower of sparks and smoke.

One of the last two—I didn't know which—managed to land a hit directly at the torso of my Wing ZERO, and if it wasn't for the heavily reinforced Gundanium armor there, I would've been obliterated. Nonetheless, my Gundam's cockpit suffered heavy damage. The monitors went static for several moments, before flickering back on to reveal cracked screens and low-power signals. I'd need to do some serious repairs... and I'd need serious medical attention once I made it out of here...

I shakily rose, Wing ZERO threatening to give out.

But I finally managed to take down the last two mobile dolls.

The battle was finally over...

Suddenly, the sensors of my Gundam went ballistic, alerting me to some unknown danger.

Through a bit of a daze, I spun around, scanning my surroundings in shock.

All the fallen mobile dolls were flashing, beeping, signaling a self-destruct.

Shit.

There was a soundless, white flash before I felt myself, my Gundam, crashing to the ground, my body screaming. Something hit me in the head, hard, and I could distantly feel hot blood already oozing from the wound.

And then there was nothing.

Black, endless nothing.

And I knew this was my end.


yeah. *grumpy voice* well, chapter 1 of 4 comes tomorrow, so if you like this, please check it out.

one of the two drabbles i have is coming along quite nicely... finally some duosufferitis... heero's been gettin all the love lately XD mwuahaha. sa anyways, stay tuned!

jaa!