A/N : Ok, I'm just taking a break from my fic, "It All Started Just Like That". Well, just a couple of weeks ago, I think, our English student teacher introduced us to one of Shakespeare's sonnets, Sonnet 130, and it made me think of trying to do a sonnet the same as that. (And since I'm bored and I would rather do something like this than to study. Ahah.) So there, now I tried it (making it a Shinkumi sonnet. --laughs--) and I hope you would find it not bad, at least.

And review please. Thanks:)


What Shin Has In Mind

(A Sonnet)

Her hair tied in pigtails was black but made of wires,

Her eyes with spectacles as thick as a book.

Very far from a woman a guy desires,

When she's near you, you cannot even look.

Her nose is broken,

Her lip is cracked,

Her breath smells like a dish that was rotten.

With this woman, no man can she attract.

When she leans beside a black painted wall you might not see her anymore,

Her body is so thin and small;

When she speaks you just want her to ignore,

And when she walks you will think that there's a troll walking in the hall.

But while I'm with her I will never feel blue

For my love for this woman is oh so true.


This is just my first time to write a sonnet so please don't be too harsh. :)