NOT A NEW CHAPTER this is a fixed version of the first chapter since my editor showed me that I had mistakes and I don't like leaving errors where they are Don't worry theres a new chapter coming soon
The night sky filled with light of a shattered moon gleaming into the houses that resided on the island Patch it was small but it's a great place to live. It was quiet in this midnight hour, well except for in one home for one child a simple soul.
"NO MOMMY DON'T GO!" She looked around realizing it was just a dream, she hugged her knees and began crying.
"Yang?"
There was no response….but then she noticed a faint glow to her left. She look to where the nightstand was only to see her mother's necklace was glowing a phantom green color. Normally the necklace just had a plain black stone so why is it glowing? Her father always told her that the necklace was important to her mother she wore it everyday, but if it's glowing does that mean it's broken? The child wonders.
Then she began to get an odd sensation in the back of her mind it was almost as if something was entering her mind, she continued to wonder about the necklace, but her hand was subconsciously reaching for the necklace, it was calling to her. When her hand finally reach the necklace her small body was lit ablaze a ghostly green. She screamed but not a sound came out, but she noticed that there was no pain….it actually felt good. The fire subsided then a deep almost demonic voice spoke.
"What is it that troubles you young Ruby?" The voice asks.
"I-I saw my mother leaving, how do you know my name? Ruby shaking in fear of this presence in her mind.
"Speak within your thoughts child I can hear them. As for your name I'm merely a figure of your imagination a friend here to help you." The voice knew that a child as young as Ruby would fall to such a lie, it was the perfect disguise for the voice.
"Oh….I'm gonna call you big bro!" The child surprising cheered with no fear.
"... If you wish, tell me Ruby what is your age?" The voice was now starting to get a bad feeling in his nonexistent gut.
"Umm.. this many!" Ruby said almost as if this was a joke to her.
"I can't SEE HOW MANY!"
"HA HA your funny big bro I'm five!"
She's unbearable I can't want for when I break out of here First thing I'll do is kill Ruby then hunt HIM, and now I know he's been gone almost five years the voice thought to itself.
"Big Bro!"
"WHAT!?"
"Do you love me?" she giggled.
It was at this moment the voice knew it fucked up.
2 hours of do you love me? Later
"Finally she's asleep!" the voice cried
"Where am I big bro?"
"DAMMIT" He didn't understand how did she get to the mindscape? He was the only one who could be here how!?
"What is this place there's so many stars!" In the mindscape there is no visible ground just an infinite amount of stars everywhere.
"Ugh…. it's to put it simply a place in your mind where I reside in and I can change its appearance at will." The voice groaned.
"Where are you at? I want to give you a hug!"
"I couldn't even if I wanted to."
"Why not?" she said sadly
"You would fear me and I don't have enough power to form my body." All because of those accursed guardians and their cheap arsenal. The voice thought to itself.
"Aww, oh well."
"You should go to sleep Ruby."
"Okay...first you have to say good night sister!"
I can't believe I'm being ordered by a child but if I don't. The voice thought of what would happen if he didn't do it she would annoy him for even longer!
"Good night sister." The voice groaned
"Good night big bro! Oh and how do I get out of here?"
"NOOOOOOOO" The voice cried in agony.
And Thus a inseparable bond begins to tighten, one that will change them both, others around them and possible one that will shatter the very foundations of Remnant. A bond of true siblings.
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Authors Note
Now I know what your thinking...WHY IS THIS SO SHORT well the answer to that is I don't know I just felt like it was long enough don't worry I HATE short fan fictions too especially if there really good ones. For now who do you all think is the voice that Ruby now calls her brother? And who was the one the voice was talking about? Only I know but its really Obvious... Oh and before I forget these are harder to write than you may think so I will be uploading once a week at the longest if not every three days? Idk I'm lazy but I do hate it when a good fanfict gets abandoned and I don't want to be a hypocrite so yea until probably more likely there will be a new chapter next week! BYE
