We messed up, so we're trying again (Don't judge us) so now it's just Liam (Azure) and Euan (Crim/Me) in this to avoid having to write from too many perspectives, anyway, let the rewrite begin.
Almost every day I was made fun of for my white hair, for the 4 years I had been in high school, but soon I won't ever hear it again , I'll actually be praised for it, but let's start from the beginning.
I was tall, about 6,1. I was wearing Blue jeans and a survey corps t-shirt and matching hoodie. I have light blue eyes and I have snow white hair.
On one snowy day I was crossing the bridge on the way to school, the bridge crossed over a narrow but deep stream that passes by the school. I heard yelling behind me.
"Hey Loser!"
I turned around to be hit in the face with a snowball while a group of jackasses laughed between them.
"At least his head can't get any more white, HAHA"
One of them walked up to me and flipped me upside down over the side of the bridge, I hit my head off a rock and passed out, slowly sinking to the bottom.
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*COUGH COUGH COUGH*
I opened my eyes to see that I was on a pier still in my original clothes, I stood up to see that I was on an island. The island was thick with greenery and resembled Hawaiian postcards. I decided to walk around and see where I was, until I saw someone.
"Hey!"
They didn't hear me so I ran up beside them and tapped them on the shoulder.
"Excuse me do you know where we ar- "
When they turned around I saw that they had fake cat ears on her head.
"Err, Do you mean where are we?" The woman asked.
"Yes, do you know?"
"We're on an island called menagerie, hey, you look familiar are you *GASP* YOU'RE A SCHNEE!"
"What?"
The woman's face started to turn red and I could see her ears actually begin to twitch as if she had control over them, so I ran.
I sprinted as fast as I could through a market place until I took a corner too fast and bumped into someone. We both fell to the floor, I leant up to see who I had bumped into, It turned out to be a young boy with red hair and bull horns, what is it with people and animal features here.
"WHERE'S THE SCHNEE"
Why does she keep calling me that? The boy spoke up.
"Oh crap did you make Kali angry? RED ALERT PEOPLE, RED ALERT!"
Suddenly every stall in the market started to pack up all their products and put up wooden barricades in from of them.
"Here follow me we need to hide".
The boy pointed to an empty cardboard box implying I had to climb in, (Solid snake mode activated). Looking through a hole in the box I could see that the woman named Kali had sprinted up to the boy.
"Crim! Did you see a Schnee!?"
"I, uh, have no idea what you're talking about".
"If you're lying to me your dead!"
"No Ma'am!"
When I climbed out of the box I saw the woman know named Kali stormed off towards a large house at the end of the island.
"Thanks for hiding me".
"It's no problem, what's a Schnee doing in Menagerie anyway?"
"I don't know what a Schnee is".
"So, you're not a Schnee?"
"No, I'm not a Schnee, what are they anyway?"
"The Schnee family thinks that all faunus are murderers and thief's and terrorists".
"Wait, Schnee, menagerie, faunus, Kali, I'm in RWBY!"
Everything started to go black as I got dizzy and fell to the floor unconscious.
