A trailer for my first story: Angels

It starts with a birthday. Everybody who is important to Eva there is to celebrate her birthday.

It starts with a friendly racing.

I love you Eva!-said Aikka-I want you to be my princess and later my queen.

I love you!-said Jordan – I would like to find a partner for a whole life. For the next ten thousand years.

A fight for Eva's hand, but neither Aikka, nor Jordan don't know that Eva is in love with who. Maybe Rick?

An unexpected visit from a forgotten world. Some old friend of Eva.

What happened when Eva was 13 years old?

A war has begun and the life and the peace are in danger.

What or who will be the key to save everybody?

What is the meaning of the phoenix's feather?

Who is the phoenix's feather's guardian? And the alienswhat kind of help needs from Eva?

Loves, adventures, old and new enemies.

Enemies have an alliance to destroy the world and make a new.

Are Eva and her friends enough strong to win or not?

Will they have a good end or not?

So this is what I have in my mind.

Please review me what do you think about it. It is very important to me to know what do you think.