STAR WARS
The Framed Jedi
Chapter 1 The Raiders
The Jedi named Kentril sat at a table in a bar wearing the normal jedi cloak with the hood over his face. Kentril was very strong with the force but really didn't show it hes human like some other people in the bar. He grew up on a merchant ship with his adopted father. Then one day a Jedi came to the ship looking for some information about something he kept watch of Kentril from the corner of his eye. Later on he talked to Kentril alone and said that the force is strong with you then he asked if Kentril would like to train to be a Jedi. Of course Kentril wanted to but his Father wouldn't let him go. The Jedi kept trying to convince Kentrils Father to let him go but he refused it all.But Then one day raiders came to the Merchant ship and wanted to trade but Kentrils Father wouldnt trade so the Raiders started a battle and started shooting everywhere killing alot of people but when the battle started the Jedi stood up and drew his sword it wasnt a normal sword in was like a big green laser with a metal handel at the end. one of the Raiders saw the laser sword which Kentril later knew it was a lightsaber. The Guy started shooting at the Jedi but the Jedi used his lightsaber to deflect the shots one of the shots must of the hit the the guy cause he fell down. Meanwhile The other raiders shot Kentrils father and took the thing they were looking for and left the Ship. Kentril and the Jedi ran over to the Kentrils father. Then Kentrils Father spoke to Kentril saying that he can go and train to be a Jedi and avenge him the Kentril father died and The Jedi put him in a pod and shot him into outter space. The Kentril and the Jedi got into the the Jedis ship and flew away.
How ya think so far?
Reveiws PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!
Star Wars and star wars characters belong to George Lucas (but i wish they belonged to me though :( )
Chapter 1 The Raiders
The Jedi named Kentril sat at a table in a bar wearing the normal jedi cloak with the hood over his face. Kentril was very strong with the force but really didn't show it hes human like some other people in the bar. He grew up on a merchant ship with his adopted father. Then one day a Jedi came to the ship looking for some information about something he kept watch of Kentril from the corner of his eye. Later on he talked to Kentril alone and said that the force is strong with you then he asked if Kentril would like to train to be a Jedi. Of course Kentril wanted to but his Father wouldn't let him go. The Jedi kept trying to convince Kentrils Father to let him go but he refused it all.But Then one day raiders came to the Merchant ship and wanted to trade but Kentrils Father wouldnt trade so the Raiders started a battle and started shooting everywhere killing alot of people but when the battle started the Jedi stood up and drew his sword it wasnt a normal sword in was like a big green laser with a metal handel at the end. one of the Raiders saw the laser sword which Kentril later knew it was a lightsaber. The Guy started shooting at the Jedi but the Jedi used his lightsaber to deflect the shots one of the shots must of the hit the the guy cause he fell down. Meanwhile The other raiders shot Kentrils father and took the thing they were looking for and left the Ship. Kentril and the Jedi ran over to the Kentrils father. Then Kentrils Father spoke to Kentril saying that he can go and train to be a Jedi and avenge him the Kentril father died and The Jedi put him in a pod and shot him into outter space. The Kentril and the Jedi got into the the Jedis ship and flew away.
How ya think so far?
Reveiws PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!
Star Wars and star wars characters belong to George Lucas (but i wish they belonged to me though :( )
