Alter
The day we get rid of evil,
Is the day we get rid of free will.
Prologue
Kenovo fell to his knees and was breathing hard. Being through something so terrifying and knowing you caused it tended to raise your pulse a bit. His trio of hearts each beat quickly. I made these things… these monsters. How could I have been so stupid?! Sana, I failed you. It is my fault you are gone. Heavy remorse, sadness, and intense regret filled his heart. Tears fell in abundance.
He heard a distant moan. Kenovo stood in a large, mostly dark room. Its walls were coated in metal and pipes. Unlike most of the titanic structure, this room had little blood in it; mostly because few people knew about it. If they did, they would have flocked here.
Light of different colors danced around the room, cast by captured portals. Each one was a different mixture of colors, denoting the different worlds they each went to.
Kenovo eyed the one to his right. It did cast a bright white/golden color and he yearned to enter it. Home, I really do wish to go there. Tears came to his eyes as he knew he could not go there and expect to live. He then looked at a red portal. I remember you, that is where I dumped them. All those years ago, I left them there. He took a few steps closer to the red one. I will make this right, I will. First off, I need to make sure these monsters do not leave this world. He approached a control panel; on it were dozens of blinking buttons and switches. He pushed a series of buttons and one by one; thick, metal shutters sealed around all but one of the portals.
As the shutters closed around the golden portal, Kenovo felt another wave of sadness. Someday, maybe I can go home… someday. With a mechanical thud, the only color of light was red.
Kenovo pushed a short series of buttons on the panel and the shutters began to close on the red portal. He took a deep breath before running and jumping into it. I will restore the imbalances I have left in your universe.
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