Please read it an tell me what you think, I hope you enjoy.
In a dark blue-ish prison, inside a cell was a young male teen with wavy unkempt black hair wearing a black and white prisoner uniform, a pair of glasses with circle frames and chains, he opened his eyes to show dark grey eyes, "Get Up Inmate!" he sat up and looked at the bars of the cell see two young girls with platinum blonde hair and yellow eyes, both wear a black eye patch with the letter "V" over one of their eyes and a blue prison guard outfit, a brassard on their left arm, they also have matching black ties. One has a long braid and a hat with the letters "O-Y-O-O" and was holding a shock baton, the other had hair buns and a hat with the letters "X-M-R-N", the boy stood up and walked up to the bars then a light shined down from the ceiling showing a bizarre old man with a long nose, pointed ears and bulging, bloodshot eyes. He wore a black suit with white gloves. "Welcome back to the Velvet Room, Trickster. I'm sure you're wondering why your here." the old man said with a deep voice, "That's one of many questions, but I'm sure you knew that." the boy said then the fierce girl with "O-Y-O-O" on her hat smacked the bars with her baton but this didn't phase the boy then she said with a fierce tomboyish voice, "Quite Imate!" "Today you're going to be relocated to a new cell." the other much calmer voiced girl said then she pulled out a key and unlocked the door then the boy walked out, 'This is new even for Igor, though Caroline and Justine are acting normal, alright keep calm Ren, just go with it.' the boy named Ren thought. (Yes, I am going with the anime's name, not the manga, if you don't know what I'm talking about either look it up or ignore this)
Then the fierce girl named Caroline yells, "Eye closed inmate!" Ren gave a questioning look to the man named Igor, who gave a simple smile back at the boy, then Ren closed his eyes than he heard Igor's voice saying, "You'll find the world much different than your own." "Wait, what?" Ren said then he felt his body go numb, he felt grass touch his body. Ren opened his eyes and found that he was in a dark and ominous forest, Ren saw that he was a pony stallion with his same old black wavy unkempt mane, a smooth grey coat, and a black and white, birdlike domino mask tattoo on his flank wearing a red-buttoned black blazer and a white turtleneck shirt with chevron detailing on the collar and red plaid trousers. "Huh... So that's what Igor meant by different." Ren said with little startlement, Ren saw his glasses out of the corner of his eye, after putting them on and them strangely fitting, he got up and started walking only to fall flat on his face when he got up again then he said, "Okay, one step at a time." Ren fell on his face again then said while his face was still in the ground, "Okay, one *motion* at a time." Ren tried to learn to walk properly and after several failed attempts he managed to figure out how to walk, he found that the forest only got thinker as it got dark, so he started to wander toward the brighter areas of the forest then the forest cleared when he walked through a large shrub, he saw an open field leading to a village from where he was he could tell that the village was filled with other ponies with different color combinations and pictures on their flanks.
Ren got some looks as he walked through the village streets, a lot of mares batted their eyes at him or waved their hooves at him with lust in their eyes, a few ponies caught his attention, some were flying through the air with rings that matched the color of their coats and some had horns that were the same color of their coats and some horns were glowing the same color of the pony's eyes, but then one pony caught his attention, it was a normal pony with an orange coat, emerald green eyes, freckles, a long blonde mane, long blond tail, both in a ponytail, and three pictures of apples on her flank, she wore a light brown Stetson, but what really caught Ren's attention toward her was that she had a leg braces on both of her hind legs, she was sitting behind a concession stand/cart with apples, a stuffed bag, and a sign that said, "Sweet Apple Acres Apples! 5 Bits Per Apple!" 'Bits... must be this place's currency.' Ren thought, he walked toward the mare but then a stallion on the other side of the stand suddenly snatched the bag and started running, the mare shouted out with a western accent, "Hey, come back here with that!" the mare tried to take chase but she fell to the ground and the stallion smiled as he ran, Ren was about to lift his hoof and punch the stallion but when he moved his leg, he felt something under his blazer, Ren quickly looked under his blazer to find his Joker Knife and Joker Gun, he had a slight flashback to when Morgana give these to him when he got an invitation to Smash Bros, 'This must be Igor's doing, how it's hiding in my blazer so well must his doing too.' Ren thought then smiled at the memory of him and his friends.
Ren snapped out of his thought when the stallion got near him, then in the blink of an eye, Ren suddenly pulled out his knife and put the stallion in a headlock holding the knife with his foreleg and close to the stallion's neck, the stallion began beading sweat like a waterfall then Ren said, "Now after you wake up, your going to rethink your life." "Wait, when I wake-" the stallion was hit with a strong hit with the pommel of the knife, knocking him out completely then as Ren put away the knife, two stallions with white coats wearing golden armor. Ren picked up the bag of coins and walked past the stallions as they dragged the thief away then he walked up to the mare, who was still trying to get back on her hooves, Ren helped the mare up onto her hooves and showed her the bag. The mare smiled and took the bag from Ren then slowly and carefully turned to the stand then placed it on the stand and turned back to Ren the same way then said, "Thank Ya Kindly, partner." she said with a tip of her hat then Ren said with a smile, "Your welcome, my names Ren." "Mah names Applejack, nice to meet ya, sugar cube." the mare named Applejack said then continued, "Thank ya again partner, I've been havin' ah hard time cause of these braces." Applejack glared at her leg braces then looked back at Ren and said, "So what brings you ta Ponyville?" 'Must be the name of this village.' Ren thought then he had an idea so he said, "I'm actually from outside of the country, I came to see the place, but I kinda short on money, do you know anyone who would be hiring?"
Applejack put a hoof to her chin then said, "Well, I can't say for certain for any jobs in Ponyville but I do know a spot at Sweet Apple Acres, I haven't been able to work so my spot in the orchard can be filled, let me pack up the stand and follow me." Ren followed Applejack after she packed up apples and bag into the stand/cart, the mares that were watching Ren glared at Applejack as they walked away, "Are you sure you should pull that cart with your braces?" Ren asked Applejack smiled and said, "I'll be fine, mah legs are strong enough is". Ren followed Applejack until they were out of the town, then they continued down a dirt road until they come to a farm with several buildings, a garden, and an apple orchard, Applejack parked the cart and started to the house, "Here we are, come on, I'll introduce to mah family." Applejack said Ren nodded and the two walked up to the house and go inside the building. Inside were three ponies, the first was a large stallion with a sandy blond mane and tail, red coat, green eyes, three freckles under his eyes, and a cut open green apple picture on his flank, he also had a horse collar, the second was a young filly with a pale yellow coat, red man and tail, gamboge eyes, and a picture of a shield with a heart-shaped apple in it, she wore a red bow in her mane, and the last one was an elderly mare with a pale green coat, white mane and tail, yellow-orange eyes, and picture of a pie on her flank, she wore an orange scarf with an apple pattern, the three ponies looked at the two and the old mare spoke, she had a shaky western accent, "Applejack, who's this fella?" "Granny, This is Ren, he's from another country, Ren this is mah Granny, Granny Smith, mah older brother, Big Macintosh, and mah little sister, Applebloom." Applejack said. The little filly named Applebloom ran up to Ren with a smile then she said with a peppy western tone, "What brings you here Mister Ren?" "Just call me Ren and as for why I'm here, Miss Applejack said there might be an opening for a job here," Ren replied Applejack nudged him then said, "Just call me Applejack, you can just call us by our names, besides Big Macintosh, you can call him Big Mac and he will see if your really able to work here." "Eeyup." the stallion named Big Mac said.
Ren walked up to the stallion and the two just started staring at each other. The mares and filly looked at the two stallions with worry in their eyes than the two stallions suddenly did a 'handshake' with their hooves, then Big Mac said with a deep western voice, "Alright, you can start in orchard tomorrow, you can sleep in the guest room until you can get your own place." Big Mac said then Ren nodded and Applebloom said, "What just happened?" "Well, Big Mac and I made a deal, I work here and until I can find my own place, I have to work extra shifts," Ren replied. The Ponies went their different ways and Big Mac showed Ren the guest bedroom, it was a simple room with one bed and dresser, then they all gathered in a dining room of the house and there was an assortment of fruit and/or vegetable made foods, the meal went with little talking and after the meal, Ren took to washing the dishes then while he finished a plate and went to another, Applebloom walked in and said, "Hey, mind if I help?" "If you want too," Ren replied and Applebloom helped the stallion with the dishes, as they cleaned Ren felt a question that bugged him a while ago so he said, "Hey Applebloom, mind if I ask something?" "Sure thing Mist- I mean, Ren," Applebloom said correcting herself the Ren asked, "How did Applejack get those braces on her legs?"
"Well, I'm not allowed to say a certain name cause Granny, Applejack, and Big Mac told me never to say it ever again, but the mare who won't be named was mah sister's best friend and the princess of Ponyville, she had a castle, was an alicorn, and everythin', mah sister was in a friendship counsel with four other best friends of her's, just so ya know their names are Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity." Applebloom smiled as she remembered something while putting away a plate then she continued, "They solve friendship problems around Equestria, but a few months ago, mah sister and her friends became to busy to even go to the castle to see where they had to go to solve the problem. Then the princess did something really bad and cast a spell would make them have to come to the castle, but it ruined my sister's hind legs and from what mah friends who were the little sister and kind of a little sister of two of mah sister's best friends told me, Rainbow Dash's wings got permanently damaged to where she can't fly for more than a few minutes and Rarity lost her eyesight and her sense of direction, that's all I got, for what happened to the others I don't know, there was a big fight at the castle, and everypony in Ponyville could hear them saying they weren't friends anymore, then they moved away and mah friends moved with them but Applejack didn't cause she refused to leave the farm, the mare who won't be named moved and her castle was torn down." Applebloom put away the last dish then lowered her head and frowned, then Ren patted her head and said, "It will be fine your sister still has family and she can make a lot of new friends at any time." Applebloom smiled then said, "Yeah! Well, good night Ren." "You too, Applebloom," Ren replied then the two went to their rooms and went sleep.
That's it for this chapter, please tell me your thoughts and favorite parts, also feel free to give me ideas for Persona names, outfit designs, mask designs, which arcana they are, and weapons for the mane 6 and any others that I decided to add to the team, also Ren only has access to his first persona and will only use the knife and gun he was given.
