Love Lost
By Sonic Blaze
Authors Note: Well, here it goes. This is my first fanfic since I was known as sonicxtreme, and that fanfic sucked BAD. So, please R&R with constructive criticism, if any criticism. No flaming please. I have improved since my last story, so I don't think this one will suck as bad and will go farther than 1 chappie. Enjoy. And the characters are hamsters.
Chapter 1: Prologue
The night stars shown ever brightly that night.
"Look at those stars, Bijou" Said a hamster.
"Zey are so beautiful, Hamtaro" Said another hamster, sitting next to the first.
Hamtaro and Bijou were sitting at the beach near their homes. It was low tide, and they were sitting at the shores edge, feet dangling into the icy cold ocean water below. The waves were flowing calmly, perfect for the warm summer night. The wind was very still, as if something was going to happen soon.
Hamtaro looked up at the night sky just in time to notice a falling star, looking rather close to the shore."Look at that! A shooting star!" Hamtaro exclaimed.
"Oooh! It is lovely!" Bijou said excitedly.
"Bijou, one day, I will catch a falling star, just for you"
"Hamtaro… Thanks for taking me out tonight. It is such a lovely night, perfect for our date"
"Yeah…Hey, look! What is that?"
A small object could be seen just on the horizon, silhouetted against the large, bright moon."I don't know," said Bijou, "Et is probably just a piece of driftwood"
"Maybe. We should investigate!" Hamtaro exclaimed.
"I would love to, but it is getting late. I have to get home before Maria gets worried"
"Ok, we can check it out later. Lets go. I'll walk you home"
Hamtaro got up first. After brushing off for a second, he helped Bijou up, who also brushed off. They began to go up a hill that led to a tunnel they and the other hamsters in town had built, for fast and safe travel to and from the beach. As they approached the tunnel, Hamtaro looked back at the ocean for the last time for tonight. From his vantage point, he could almost see the entire beach. He stood their for a sec, taking in the sight of the bright moon reflecting off the dark ocean, and the smell of the salty air. He noticed that the object they had seen from the shore had vanished. He began to look around when Bijou wondered where he was.
"Coming Bijou." Hamtaro said as he looked away from the ocean and ran up to the tunnel where Bijou was waiting.
"What were you doing?" Bijou queried.
"Just taking in the sight of the ocean." Hamtaro said.
"It is beautiful tonight, isn't it?" Bijou said dreamily.
Hamtaro stood there, took a quick look back at the shore, and walked with Bijou through the tunnel home.
Sorry for the no indenting. I save changes and the editor wont save them. I'll fix those and replace the chapter. Anyway, there's a lot more to come, so keep reading. Please review. Even though this is a short chapter, they will get longer. I am just bad at prologues. Well, hope you liked. -Sonic Blaze
