Hello! Ok, so, the rating on this might go up, but for now it's T. T for torture, blood, and violence.

EDIT: This was started before the Last Hope was out, so this isn't exactly like the books.


Jayfeather turned his head frantically. When were Lionblaze and Hollyleaf? Where was Dovewing? He had lost them in the insanity of battle.

"Hollyleaf! Dovewing!" He yowled. He wasn't particularly worried about his brother because of his power, but the others... "Ivy..." He started, but was cut off as the heavy body of another cat threw him to the ground. He recognized the scent.

"Breezepelt!" He hissed. The tom on top of him chuckled, and dug his claws into Jayfeather's side. The medicine cat flinched, not being used to having his own injuries. This made Breezepelt laugh again.

"Poor useless medicine cat." He hissed quietly next to the other tom's ear. "Can't even see to protect himself." Jayfeather struggled desperately against the larger cat, but it was hopeless. Jayfeather could feel blood seeping out of his side now, and with is his strength eddied away too.

"Why kill me Breezepelt? What have I done to you?" Jayfeather hissed angrily. Breezepelt laughed again. Jayfeather was really beginning to hate that laugh.

"I'm not going to kill you now!" he growled, and he slashed the blind cat across the face with his thorn-sharp claws. Jayfeather yowled out in pain, and just before he blacked out, he heard that horrible laugh…

Ok, this is my first warriors fanfiction. What do you think? This chapter wasn't great, I know, but I promise it'll get better! :)

-Spottedpool