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Chapter one

"Demon child!" she said as she struck my face. She has done it before but this time I won't be able to stop her. No this time I take it, she hits my face and I can feel it welting already.

"Mom, please." I plead; I don't want to lose control.

"Shut up you…DEMON! Give me back my little girl." She starts to whimper; I want to hit her.

No I need control. Think of Dad…dad. If he were here she wouldn't have gone this far. "Mom, look I didn't ask for this, Dad wouldn't have wanted you to act this way. Please, it's me. I didn't go anywhere."

For a minute she falters and I see the loving and caring mother that I hope she still is, but my mom is gone, "you get out, GET OUT."

I get up as soon as she finishes and dodge the plate she impulsively threw. I run down the hallway towards the front door and out onto the street. Its night and the street lamps are on. I begin walking down the sidewalk. I hate her, why did you leave me dad? How could you? A muggy feeling in the air tells me that it has rained recently. The moisture in the air will turn my blond hair wavy, instead of its natural straight look.

I turn a sharp right down an alley to get to the field. My sanctuary. I notice my reflection in a shallow puddle on the pavement; blond hair now wavy from the moisture in the air, grey eyes with the dark rings circling them, and my bruises. The purple blotches cover my pale arms and cheeks. I lightly trace my fingers over the fresh one forming from tonight. These aren't just bruises they are war wounds; countless battles with my god worshipping mother, dozens of scream offs that end in my bloodshed.

Deciding that I was beaten up and that I should get over it, I continued walking towards the field. Thoughts of the perfectly cut grass, roses, and the star-lit night dance around in my head. My pace quickens to a jog and within minutes I find myself in front of the row of familiar towering trees. I step between two small bushes ad enter the small forest. At first I would get lost for hours in this miniature forest, but after getting used to the way the trees contort I found the field. Proceeding into the wooden maze, I finally came to my haven.

Suddenly I feel more at home than ever. Skipping over to the giant tree in the middle of the field, I flick my wrist and a single rose detaches itself from its bush and flies into my hand.

"How may I ask, did you do that?" a voice said making me jump two feet into the air, I cut myself on a thorn.