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Ok so this is my first story in a very long line of stories please give me feedback I really want to know what you guys thing I forgot to mention in the story is that air nation people can harness air fire people harness fir so on and so fourth you get what I mean.

My name is Alen Thunderous, I live in a world that consists of four kingdoms, the earth kingdom, fire nation, air nation, and thunder kingdom. I was born in the thunder kingdom in fact im the prince of the thunder kingdom. There used to be peace between us all but that all changed after the the emperor of the fire nation died he had a son but he was too young to take the throne, so the emperors brother Lee shun took the throne that evil son of a bitch if only I knew what he was going to do then. It all started when Lee shun told the king of the air nation that the thunder kingdom would cut off their peace treaty unless they gave us the jewels on their air gods shrine. The king refused strongly so Lee Shun took the jewels and everyone thought it was the thunder kingdom. So the king of the air nation sent his strongest stealthiest soldiers to destroy the thunder gods shrine my father the king of thunder was outraged all four kingdoms were on the brink of war, it was I go on im going to tell you a little bit about me im 14 years old as you already know im the prince of the thunder kingdom when a prince turns 14 he is given his familys sacred sword it is very powerful and deadly.

Ok so tell me if you like it so far if you do ill continue.