Hi readers, I am Nicholas and this is my first book, please tell me some suggestion on how to write it because I am very new to writing fanfics.

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Hiro and Tadashi grew up and they never knew who their father was, until their mother died, they lived with Aunt Cass, he invented the microbots, then his brother died in a fire, he felt very lonely, he went to alleys to bot fight to get his mind of his brother's death, it didn't help so baymax came and helped, Hephaestus(his father) was always watching on Hiro feeling sorry for him. Hephaestus secretly build a robot looking exactly like Tadashi, and was following and observing Hiro for Hephaestus, Tadashi the robot had intelligence made by Tadashi himself, it has emotions, ageing, and thoughts