Hi People!

This is somewhat close to what it used to be, but it has some changes.

"Forgiveness is a virtue of the brave."

Indira Gandhi

Now…

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The Dark Phantom: Origins, Chapter 1: Prologue


A cloaked figure watched as a newly born child was held in the arms of his mother, the father and sister standing by happy.

They watched, the future of the child flashing by before their ever watching eyes, not allowed to interfere.

The figure smiled sadly before turning back to the screen with the family

"Be careful little one, the future is dark and bleak, only time will tell how you change."


One, I am mass editing this story, technically rewriting it without creating another story. This chapter didn't change much, but the next few will.

Two, This story is complete, but the series is not. I want to create a new story but at the same time I do not. Please tell me what you think.

Three, No I am not going to stop answering reviews, but they will go in the chapters that they were a part of.

Four, As for those of you who read the original then the chapters should just change more towards the final chapter styles.

Five, Lay out is changing and will hopefully stay more constant. And I am trying to edit out all plot holes as well.

Six, I'm doing multiple things at once. Ignoring school, I'm programming a game, mass editing this story, and planning the next part. So, apologies if I rewrite this kinda slow.

Peace and pieces,

Sugar500