kayristilla zanctos: my first fan fic and it's on Jak and Daxter. BTW Kat, if you read this I gave your characters different names, but they are there. The beginning letter is the same. I like what you did with the bold there:)

Chapter 1

Society Reject

Lyrica aimed. Diablo was right in front of her, and this time, this time, she would get him. The rabbit was mocking her. It just sat there, staring, while it was deciding what leap it should use today. Every year, Lyrica tried again, every day until winter.

Her long ears twitched in anticipation. This was the day. The long cloak she wore hid her features, and her. Lyrica released the bowstring, and, as usual, Diablo hopped off.

"Dang it! Arrgh! I swear, next time I see that rabbit, it's all over!" Lyrica seethed. "Well, it's time for supper, so I'll just go with what I have."

"Hey, sweetie, catch Diablo today?" Isabella, Lyrica's mom(aunt), asked.

"Not today. It'll be the end of me. I swear he was laughing at me!" Lyrica pounded her fist against the table. Ever since Isabella's leg nerves died, she's been wheelchair-ridden, which disabled her and cut her off from hunting. Thus, Lyrica provided the meat.

"Whistle whistle whist-" Isabella(Izzy) began to say.

"Mom, the heck are you doing?" Lyrica was laughing with a quizzical look on her face.

"I don't feel like whistling, so I'm saying the word." They burst out laughing.

After supper, Lyrica headed upstairs. She had the skins of her prey in hand, and grabbed the salt from it's shelf upstairs. The fifteen year old cured the skins as best she could. They later found themselves on a rack with other skins. Lyrica dressed for bed, brushed her teeth andher blonde hair, tied her hair up, and went to bed.

She soon drifted off to sleep.

The next day, Lyrica sighed. She was a society reject, and was even rejected from the rejects. Sometimes it wasn't so easy living in Haven City. But then she smiled. Her mother was friends with some adults, and their kids were the ones that disliked her. Well, now whether they liked it or not, they'd have to see her. She'd make sure of it.

Lyrica got dressed in her usual outfit. She had on khakis(did I spell that right?), a red tank top, and a dark grey velvety jacket( sweatsuit style). Downstairs, she grabbed her white sneakers and shoved them on with her feet(sockless!) as she ate breakfast. She loved multi-tasking. Eggs, check. Bacon, check. Toast, going, going, gone! 'Kay, done with that, onto my hair and teeth.

Lyrica headed back up to her room. She tugged out her ponytail. In her bathroom, she pulled out her toothbrush, hairbrush, and toothpaste. The elf(yes, they're elves 'pointy ears') squeezed out some paste, and brushed. She was done brushing her hair and her teeth at the same time.

Hopping along now,(calling her Lyr now, yes I am rather lazy,) Lyr tied up her sneakers.

"Bye, mom! See you after school!"

"Bye, Lyri!"

At school, as usual, all of the kids were avoiding her. No eye contact, no coming near, it was as if Lyr was the only person alive. She didn't care too much. And there were the twins, Dalyas and William. Ah, William, Lyr has had a crush on him since forever.

kayristilla: MWAHAHAHAHA! CLIFFHANGER! (begins singing) Cliffhanger, hanging from a cliiiiiiiiiiiiff. And that's why he's called cliffhanger! hahaha don't kill me.