New story I started writing just over a year ago not very far into it though :/

Its messed up

It's actually the second story I came up with for the Amuto couple.

My names Amu Hinamori and it started with what happened three and a half years ago when I was 13. So to protect my little sister from what happened to me, what my parents couldn't protect me from, I stole my sister and now I stay with her at all times, watching her. We now go by Ruza and Riza Kyoto now and our only safe haven is my friend's homes, but we only stay with them for the weekend before we go back to where I take Ami to school.

I have long wavy black hair with pink highlights and honey colored eyes and my sister has black hair with purple highlights and golden brown eyes. My sister and I have a lot of chara's, most of them are too protect ourselves. I have Ran, Miki, Su, Dia, Cross, Raven, Sukiume, Tecna, Monkey, and Ichigo. My sisters are Brownie, Pie, Carrot, Sky, and Kori. I got Ran, Miki, and Su when I was in fourth grade. Dia when I was starting fifth grade. Cross the day after it happened for the first time. And I got Raven, Sukiume, Tecna, Monkey, and Ichigo the day after my parents told me that they were going on a two year business trip and that we would be staying with HIM. My sister got Pie when she was 5 and Brownie, Sky, Carrot, and Kori then day after we ran away.

Ran has long pink hair in a pony tail and pink eyes, she has a red heart clip on a pink visor, and she wear a pink cheer leader outfit with pink and white tennis shoes.

Miki has short blue hair and blue eyes, she wears a barrette with a blue spade clip on it, she wears a white shirt with a navy blue vest over it, blue shorts and black shoes.

Su has green eyes and blond hair with a light green tint, and a light green hat with a green clover attached to it, she wears a green dress with a white apron over it and green ballerina shoes.

Dia has long orange hair in two pony tails and amber eyes, a white head band with two yellow diamonds attached to it, she wears a yellow shirt and skirt with a lighter yellow diamond on her shirt, white leggings.

Cross has long black hair and silver eyes, she has a gray cross hair clip, and a gothic Lolita dress that's black and gray, black hand gloves with gray lace, and black boots.

Raven has short spiked purple hair and purple eyes, she wears a long sleeved purple shirt with a black raven on it and baggy black pants with purple and black shoes and black wings.

Sukiume has long lavender hair with a yellow wolf hair clip and yellow eyes dark purple shirt with a yellow moon on it and black pants. Purple paws a little lighter than her shirt with lavender pads, and dark purple wolf ears and tail.

Tecna has short spiked pink hair with light green eyes, a pink shirt with a computer on it and a striped pink and light green skirt and pink and light green tennis shoes and red fox ears and tail with light green tips.

Monkey has short yellow hair and yellow eyes, a orange dizzy symbol hair clip. A yellow one piece out fit with yellow leg warmers and small arm warmers all with orange trim on all and orange hand gloves, shoes and monkey ears and tail.( what pudding wears when she transforms).

Ichigo has long black hair and pink highlights and honey colored eyes, like mine. Pink ears and tail with black tips with a bell on it, dark pink paws and lighter pink pads, short black shirt covering her top half of her torso and short black shorts , black leggings .

Pie has short magenta hair and eyes, white head band with an upside down purple heart, purple panda ears and white tail, she wore a outfit that looked like a purple and white panda bear, but almost skin tight.

Brownie has short black hair with purple highlights with golden brown eyes, brown cat ears and tail with black tips, brown paws with pink pads, she wears a purple shirt with brown pants and purple and brown tennis shoes.

Sky has short light blue hair yellow eyes, has a black head band with a white dove on it, has pure white wings, and wears a baby blue t-shirt with blue jeans and white tennis shoes.

Carrot has white hair and brown eyes, has brown ears and tail, has a black headband with a carrot on it, and wears a white shirt with a carrot on it and black shorts and tennis shoes.

Kori has silver hair and gold eyes, has a black head band with two gold X's and a silver heart in-between them, has silver dog ears, tail, and paws. Paws and ears have gold X's on them, she wears a black shirt with a big silver X on it and gold hearts around the end of her sleeves, black pants with gold hearts around the bottom of them, and gold black and silver shoes.

So fickin jittery for staying up to type this and now gonna start typing the next chapter.

I really want to know what people think of the idea of the story

So please read and review