This is the first lil "fanfic" I've written so review it and tell me what you think.

This "story" is based on the lives and comics by June and Tina of AP. Most of its on comic so I decided why not do a written bit of it. (My Version) lol. Therefore the first 3 of the chapters will be based on the comic and the rest we'll see. (Original characters include Cari, Amy, Tashi, Junie, and Tinie.) (If u don't get it, it's probably because most of it's a insider joke.)

Chapter 1 The start of it all:

"Yukito..." as Cari watched him from a distance, but then she saw Alias and anger rose in her.. And out of no where Cari punched Alias. "I was punched... I'm a popular cheerleader... How could you..." said Alias as steam rose from her head. "BAKA" boomed Alias, "Everyone's staring" Yukito stated in embarrassment. "BAKA!!!!..." Alias said to Cari as Yukito pulled Alias away. "Cari..." Yukito whispered sadly... "Damn it I feel so embarrassed..." as Cari spoke to herself.

(In class during French...)

"Yukito..." as Cari layed on her desk all pooped out. Junie's dreaming about Inu yasha as part of her daily routine during French. "Junie's my husband..." thought Tinie.

(Meanwhile in Science...)

"Dave, Rye... And Habbo...." *sighs in a lovely dovey way...*



(Meanwhile in French again...)

"Damn I can't think..." Cari said as Junie and Tinie are banging on the tables laughing. "SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" yelled Cari and Tinie and Junie as the wind passed by... *Junie points at Cari* "Possessed by Kikyo...*Cari sighs heavily* "Oh My God! Cari, how could you let yourself get possessed by Kikyo!!! Why?!" *Cari sighs heavily again...* "Oh god... not this again... stop it June!

"Hi Amy!" as Amy walks in... "Hi Junie" As steam rose from Tina's head "Junie...!!! I thought you loved me!" Tashi is dazed off... "I know 3 guys from Habbo that are really hot, and I also know these 2 other guys that look kind of weird.."

To be continued...

Sorry to be leave you people on a cliff hanger but I wanted to get this as soon as possible so this is the 1st half of chapter 1.