Title: The Wrong Surprise
Rating: K+
Claimer: Yes, I do own Doctor who. Oh come on so many stories SOMEONE has to own it.
Sci-Fi/Action/Adventure
Slight pairing of 10Dr and Rose, you know, how they are in the real Doctor Who. Ok guys this is my first fic. My name is Fiona and I live in England and I'm in Year 8, I hope you enjoy this!
Rose sat quietly in a chair by the control room, watching a certain Doctor in amusement. The Doctor, meanwhile, was crazily pulling levers and flicking switches, focusing on the screen to get to wherever they were going today.
"Where are we going this time Doctor?" she said excitedly.
"Well,my Rose, thats for me to know and you to find out!" he smiled at her, and laughed when she gave him a puppy-eyed look.
"Oh pleeeeease!" she begged.
"Nope, I'm not telling you,no matter how much you beg, and thats hard, you know me. I want this one be a total surprise this time." he told her half-firmly, but half-laughing because she started pouting.
"Oh fine!" she said, giving up, and sat back down in her chair, which she hadn't realised she had gotten off in the first place.
Rose liked the new doctor. He was different in many ways, but she had become accustomed to him. He was about an inch shorter then the the old doctor,and had a smaller frame. He had much more hair this time; a darkish brown that stuck up in some places and she sometimes had the urge to ruffle it up even more. He had deep brown eyes like her this time,which were a warm welcoming chocolaty brown, and were a slightly lighter shade then her own ones.His nose and ears were smaller and were of normal size, Rose sometimes missed his big ears,it was something she could tease him about.
"Hey Rose! We're here!" he said as the TARDIS came to a stop and settled on the ground
"Oh good!" she said, brightening up because she finally got to know where they were.
"So are you going to tell me where the hell we are, or are we on some deserted planet?"
"Oh, well, actually I don't know where we are either to be honest." he said looking down guiltly
"What? How will we know what to do here? What if its hostile?" she asked, looking worried for a moment.
"Don't worry.I told the TARDIS to take us on a surprise journey this time! She wouldn't take us to a planet that is hostile towards us!" he said in attempt to calm her down.
"Lets go outside and I'll show you!" he said grinning, marching towards the TARDIS doors. Rose sighed and got up and followed him.
But apparently the Doctor, and the TARDIS, had been wrong.
"Uh, Rose, I think we may find out where we are soon."he said to her.
" Too right," she said quietly when she had come to stand outside with the Doctor. " Typical of us.I knew something would happen like this."
The Doctor and Rose had conviently stepped out of the TARDIS to be greeted by being surrounded around a vicious looking race of purple coloured aliens that were carrying lethal looking guns and staff weapons. Rose mentally rolled her eyes,this was the third time this had happened. She hoped the Doctor would find a way out of this one.
"Er, um, hello! Take us to your leader!" he said in his usual attempt to try to be friendly when they met hostile aliens.Rose shook her head in despair, it never worked.
"Who are you? And how did you manage to trespass on our planet?" said one of the red aliens in a low, dark voice.
"Oh! Well I'm the Doctor, and this is my companion Rose! We're just passing by." he said cheerfully as if there was nothing wrong at all, but not mentioning how they got here.The alien didn't really seem to care where they were from anyway, and silently ordered two of the red aliens to grab hold of The Doctor and Rose.
" Oi! Be careful!" Rose scolded the alien who had grabbed her forcefully
" Yeah, come on, no way to treat visitors!" said the Doctor.
" Quiet both of you! You have trespassed on our planet and we will take both of you to our emperor to let him deal with you!" the alien said getting annoyed at the two.
" Well at least we get to see their leader like we asked Rose" he said quietly so only Rose could hear, and trying to be optimistic and brighten up the situation, even though they were now being frog-marched up to the city with the red aliens pointing their staff weapons into each of their backs.
" You mean like YOU asked Doctor."she said exasperately "I'm just glad we're together, normally we are split up from each other. What if they do that with us?" she asked worriedly
" Don't worry Rose. I can't guarantee that we will be together the whole time. But I'll try to get us out of this one as quickly as possible." he said to her comfortingly, and held onto her hand.
"I know Doctor," she whispered " You always do." They smiled at each other, and Rose tightened the grip on his hand.
They weren't sure where they were going, or if they would stay together, but they would make sure they would get out alive. They always did.
To be continued...
Chapter two should be up soon, well at least I hope it will be, any ideas and constructive criticism is welcome, seeing as this is my first fic and I want to be able to make it better.
Oh I think I need a better name for my story.
