A land to despair
Prologue
Authors notes
Hey people who have the time to read this, I don't know if this is any good but I'll give it a go, first story. I've had this idea for a while along with a few others. Any constructive criticism is read and acknowledged thx
"unworthy" I whispered stepping to the edge of the basket. "unworthy" I sobbed, emotion filling my throat. "UNWORTHY"I screamed at last falling from the basket. Away from the hot air balloon that would assist in my demise. I screamed, just because I wanted this, didn't mean my instincts made me fear the rushing howling wind that occupied all of my thoughts. I fell. And fell . And fell. And almost bitterly thought of the mares that would mourn for me. My legs and arms flailing as i fell causing me to spin, around and around. I was almost laughing when i thought he could of come up with a quicker way to do "the deed". As I finally saw the ground approaching i closed i eyes and waited for my spine to break and my head to- " GOTCHA" somepony shouted as I was pulled away from the ground and its warm embrace and back to the tortured pain of living with mare too fantastic for me, a mere human to live up to, I knew they were trying to be my friends but, them being the perfection they are and me being.a foolish human, unworthy of their love. I felt like the rainbow named mare carrying me back to Ponyville was just insult to injury, salt to the wound. " did you see me back there I was AWESOME, I mean I know I'm awesome anyway but I was like 20% cooler!" that was rainbow dash always loyal and never gonna let me "leave" for want of a better word. I couldn't tell her or any of them because then I wouldn't get a chance. So as we flew back I thought to myself attempt 1: fail.
so let me know about the idea if anyone likes it, I'll keep posting when I can , not organised enough for a schedule.
