Well this is my first story so i hop that itisn't too bad but review and let me know what you think, cheers.
"RAAK!" boomed the voice of the elder, "Come forth receive your Token" Raak walked towards the podium to receive his token. You see to be able to hunt for trophies the yuatja must finish a training course which consists of two years of vigorous excersise and painstaking preparation. All of those who completed this course, would come out a skilled and accurate killer, ready for the hunt.
Raak passed the course along with his older brother Kane, Kane however received a medal of honour for completing the course with exceptional results. The only yuatja to exceed Kane's results was that of his eldest brother Spawn who received his token four years earlier. Raak received his token from the elder and rejoined his brother. The elder's handed them their token's and also upgraded weapons, which would assist them in becoming even more efficient killing machines.
"Hey kane, are you nervous?" Questioned Raak "Nah it'll be just like training" said Kane. "I am, do you think Spawn was this nervous - " just then Spawn entered the room, "Good to see you brothers, Raak I overheard you, just remember that there is no pressure to get a trophy just do your best," reassured Spawn. "But were you nervous" "Look Raak if you want to become a skilled warrior you can't let your fears control you, look I have to go, and Kane, be strong I know you are, fairwell." Raak decided to go and do some training to ease his mind, and to get used to the new equipment, While Kane stayed back to sharpen his spear, he was content on using his old gear, as that was what he felt comfortable with.
Just then Kane received a message, he checked his screen it was the elders they had, approved of their results, and they were to go on their first hunt to prove that they have what it takes to be a true warrior. Raak also received the message. They boarded their pods and readied themselves for the trip. Their Destination: Earth.
Three earth days Later they arrived on earth. Their pods landed in a secluded corn field, they departed their pods and started to explore the place in which they landed, they soon recived a message from the elders, they were experiencing some kind of strange signal from an unidentified ship, and Raak and Kane were to shorten their trip to one night, in stead of two earth days.
The two yuatja spotted a light in the distance, it was coming from a barn and decided that what ever was living over there would become their first trophies. Kane readied his weapons as he headed off in one direction while Raak head of in the other, they planned to attack from both sides.
"Aaww come on jesse" tormented the mullin, a 19 year old boy who enjoyed picking on little kids "grab your glasses come on jump boy, jump, here Clint catch." He threw the little boy's glasses to his friend clint " Hey come on boy, over here, whats the matter can't you see, come on b.." just then something made Clint freeze in fear he dropped his glasses the boy felt around for them, he grabbed them, and ran. "Clint man what gotten into ya," Clint said nothing "Clint Cl…" just then Mullin saw some corn stalks move, and he heard something, he followed the sound and he saw shadowy figure, one that had shiny skin and startlingly focused eyes, they seemed to stare right through him, it's as if they cut him. The boys stood there frozen by the gaze of this creature, Raak circled he unsheathed his wrist baldes and pounced on Clint, and in one swift movement he claimed his first trophy. Kane raised his spear and thrust it toward Mullin it pinned him against the barn wall, Kane walked over to him to seize his first trophy. Mullin looked up at the yuatja he opend his moth to scream but nothing came out he froze, he look at the predator as it unsheathed it's wristblade and the last thing that he saw was that blade, swiping down, quick and simple.
"Pity we only have one night to hunt, I'm starting to get the hang of this" said Raak "See what did I tell you nothing to worry about, well not with these creature they are much weaker then the …" just then they received a message from the elders and it wasn't a good one either…
