I've had this idea floating around for a while it's basically going to be Naruto, with Naruto raised by one of my favorite characters made by a different author, there might be a couple characters from other universes as well depending if they'd fit in. I'm also going to be messing with dates a little, the Kumo treaty is going to have been signed early october. And now on with the show.

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Shinobi Gashira was ecstatic, he had just gotten out of the Hyuuga compound with the clan heiress gagged and bound to take back to Kumo. He thought, "Heh, those leaf-nin and Hyuuga are weak and foolish. The branch hates the main family so much it was easy to turn them and that foolish Hokage believes that we would actually go done quietly…"

His thoughts were cut off by a shout of, "Stop, and drop the child!" He looked and saw a man wielding a strange weapon

Gashira sneered and said, "What could you do to me civilian."

The man shouted again and he saw a green flash and Gashira knew no more.

Hiashi saw the man kill the enemy Jounin with one technique. The man had no headband so as Hiashi approached with caution incase he was a nuke-nin. The person that had killed the Kumo Nin stood at about five-foot ten inches had gray almost black hair, and wore an orange trench coat. His weapon turned out to be a bird that seemed to be some sort of summon.

Hiashi got to Hinata and untied her and turned to her savior and said, "Thank you."

Then a group of ANBU appeared on the screen and surrounded the trench-coated man. One of them said, "Halt, you are wanted for questioning in regards to the kidnapping attempt."

Hiashi intervened so that the person wasn't sent to be "interrogated" and said, "That won't be necessary ANBU-san, this person killed the would be kidnapper." The ANBU nodded knowing that Hiashi would know the truth.

The ANBU replied, "Be that as it may, he still needs to come with us to at least report what happened. Thinking about it you and your daughter should probably come as well." Hiashi and the person nodded and followed the ANBU that they were talking to as the others cleaned up the scene and moved the body.

The Hokage came into the room wearing his usual robs but they seemed to have been put on hastily. He motioned for them to sit and said, "First off I think some introductions are in order. I am Sarutobi, the Sandaime Hokage, and the person who you saved was Hyuuga Hinata this is her father Hiashi. Now who might you be?"

The man replied, "It's nice to meet you Sarutobi and I am Jing, and the bird on my shoulder is Kir."

Sandaime paled at his name and asked, "What brought you to our village, Jing?"

Jing replied, "I'm looking for the Kyuubi's hoshi no tama, it should look something like a crystal ball, and if it is the yin part of its soul it should allow remote viewing, but if it's the yang part of the soul it should grant large amounts of power to be used while it is within the users grasp. Have you seen anything like these?"

Sarutobi stuttered, "No, there aren't and viewing orbs or power balls here."

Jing could tell he was lying but decided not to call him on it and just find it later. He said, "Alright, I guess I'll just hang around here and see if I can't get any leads."

Sarutobi, not liking where this was going asked, "Could you describe what happened, all I got from the ANBU that got me was that Kumo betrayed us."

Jing nodded, "I was heading towards the hotel district, because I just arrived, and I saw that Nin carrying a child sized sack and I saw some movement in it. That is one of the few things that I can't stand, kidnapping, so I called out for him to stop, he didn't listen so I killed him with a Kir Royale. Then Hiashi and the ANBU arrived and I was brought here."

Sarutobi surmised, "It seems Kumo wanted to steal the Byakugan, this should give us a large edge in re-writing the treaty, especially now that no one will trust them. The fact that it was one of the head shinobi will be moot because it was Jing that killed him since he isn't a Konoha citizen. Now then, thank you for telling me what happened Jing. You may leave."

Jing was about to head to his hotel after another fruitless day so Kir would quit bitching about his night-blindness when he heard a shout of "Die Demon!" thinking it was just some overly enthusiastic drunk at a festival game stall he continued until he heard a child scream. He rushed to where the child was and saw a few obviously intoxicated shinobi standing over an unconscious blond child. One of the drunks was about to stab the child again when Jing took action. He quickly separated the drunks arm from his shoulder he scared off the small mob then looked onto the small child. Amazed the wound caused from the first stab Jing decided that the hospital would be unnecessary and took the child to see the Hokage.

Sarutobi sighed as he listened to Jing's tale, knowing that it was all too possible Jing finished his rant by saying, "Do all your ninja make it a habit of risking the safety of the village?"

This sentence puzzled Sarutobi because he didn't think Jing knew about the Kyuubi so he asked, "the attack was a tragedy but how was it endangering the village?"

Jing looked at him like he was stupid and said, "The boy does hold the nine-tailed fox right?"

Sarutobi replied, "Yes he does, who told you it's an s class secret."

Jing snorted, "No one did the stupid Nin shouted 'die demon' it's kind of hard not to put two and two together, even a bird brain like Kir could figure it out." they both ignored an indigent shout of "Hey!" coming from said bird.

Sarutobi sighed again, "yes he is the container of the fox, and I wish the villagers would at least use common sense when it comes to Naruto, I just don't know what to do, no one will take him in and both of his parents died shortly after he was born."

Jing, having wanted an apprentice for a while suggested, "Why don't you let me take him, I'm going to get the hoshi no tama so it would be good for him if he got it as soon as possible. And he'll be much safer with me than in this village."

The Hokage inquired, "Why would the hoshi no tama help him?"

Jing answered, "The hoshi no tama is the most valuable thing to a Kitsune, it is the other half of its soul, Naruto having it would give him a lot of power over the Kyuubi."

Sandaime thought about it for a few moments then finally said, "I suppose that you can bring him with you, lord knows the villagers will try to kill him again if he stays. Alright he can go with you, but I want him to come back when he turns 12 to become a shinobi like his father would have wanted." Jing nodded his consent. "Let me get some things for him." He left the room and came back with four scrolls and an orb. He handed the scrolls to Jing and said, "Those are for chakra control and the academy jutsu so he can graduate the academy. And this orb is most likely the Kyuubi's hoshi no tama, I'm sorry for being deceitful but I didn't want you to steal it Mr. King of Bandits. I believe that it is a yin Hoshi no tama, I have used it to keep an eye on Naruto."

Jing replied, "It's ok I honestly didn't expect you to tell me the truth about it anyway. I will bring Naruto back in nine years; he should have the best stealth and retrieval in the village when he comes back. I'll leave tonight if that's ok, I'd prefer to get Naruto out of this environment as quickly as possible."

Sarutobi agreed, "Yes it would be best to get him out before the 10th." He reached into his desk and pulled out two scrolls, "These will allow him and you to return without hassle and grant you Konoha citizenship when you return, they are both blank incase you want a fresh start or Naruto wants to use his father's family name."

Jing questioned, "And his father would be?"

Sarutobi sighed, "Minato Namikaze, the Yondaime Hokage, and his mother was Uzumaki Kushina, a nin from whirlpool country."

Jing said, "If that's everything, I think I'll be heading out now, I want to get back to my home as soon as possible."

Sarutobi shook his hand, "Alright, you may go and I hope to see you in nine years, have a safe trip and keep Naruto happy and healthy."

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there we go first chapter in my another story. It will be a naruXharem, I think it's going to be a Naruto X femKyuu X Hinata X femHaku X kin X Tayuya. I might add Temari.

Please review, I will probably update in the next two days.

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