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I came up with this story at work

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SUZU-POV

My name is Suzu kitsune heiress of the kitsune clan im seven and a half years old with crimson eyes black hair but what most people can say is that im very mature for my age some have even said i'v skipped my childhood and went strait to adulthood which I take great pride in I also have a few jutsu's under my belt.

My clan is a sister clan to the Inuzuka clan, but instead of using dogs we use foxes, we currently are packing up to move to a ninja village to get farther away to the civil war torn land that's a mile away from our current village so the first village we are choosing to look at for a permanent home is Konoha due to the fact that Inuzuka live there is a plus for them, but there is a small negative stupid villagers, but what can you do.

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2 WEEKS LATER - OUTSIDE OF KONOHA

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'Kami if I hear one more person "say are we there yet" I'm gonna kill somebody' i thought then as if Kami thought my sentence has been served I heard my dad say "we have arrived out side Konoha I will be taking a few with me to asses this village as a new permanent home for our clan" I knew I was going so I went along with the group.

When we got done checking in at the gate we dispersed and went our various ways, I was walking the village at random when I noticed blood on the ground raising an eyebrow I choose to follow the bloody path, not to long into following it I heard a soft crying sound which made me pick up the pace, and there I found him by a river lying down curled into a ball a golden blond three year old child with three whisker marks on each cheek who looked like a little angle to me a bundle of joy to be with, but I was angry very angry at the condition he was in bloody, bruised, broken need I go on, 'where the hell is his parents and who the FUCK would do that to him he looks so so gentle' I thought.

I walked over to the boy who was passed out, I noticed he was starting to heal which made me happy, I started to clean the blood off him like a mother would do and should do 'where the hell is this boys mom or dad even and why do this to a child i know I should not feel attached but but but i just am ' I thought.

I got finished up cleaning him 'time to start doing some digging on him' I thought, i looked towards the sky and figured it was 12:00 'plenty of time' I though then suddenly I herd "hey Suzu your dad wants you to go to the hokage mansion to meet the hokage with him" said Riko my fox partner "shhhhh keep your voice down you'll wake the boy" I snapped "ok geez if I didn't know you I'd thought you were his mother" she said as she walked away I involuntary blushed, I got up and was off to the hokage tower.

When we reached the hokage tower I meet with the secretary and she told me where to go, as I walked through the door"good afternoon hokage-sama"i said. (A/N did I get that right)

"Ah good afternoon Suzu kitsune your father has told me a lot about you" "good that saves me introductions now I have business with you then ill be on my way hokage-sama" I said then he looked at me In disbelief my dad turned to the hokage "as I was saying before shes more adult than child all thou I have no idea how it came to be, and I must say im curios what this business she has with you thou" the old man before me took only a second to get his im a bad ass serious face on "go ahead young one" he said that made me cringe a bit but I let It slide "i need info on a boy who lives in this village" I asked my father raised an eye brow at me the hokage's face seemed to brighten up a bit "do have this boys name" I cringed at that "no I do not for he was UNconscious when I found him" 'crap I didn't want to say it like that' I though but his eyes held great sadness and regret "golden blond hair, whisker marks do I have that right" I was shocked "y-yes" finally came out of my mouth after a few seconds "Naruto" he said "what" I asked "his name is Naruto ... he's an orphan a very troubled orphan with so much hate directed at him that he gets chased by mobs" he said wile his starting to lose composure 'WHAT DID I HEAR THAT RIGHT, MOBS CHASING A THREE YEAR OLD!' I screamed to my self wile leaking some killer intent (A/N will be know as KI if i continue this story) then he continued "some of the clans have try to adopt him but have failed due to the law that was made by the civilian council that forbids a member of this village to adopt him" he said with great sadness, my eyes were wide 'a law that prevents him from having a family that's so cruel to do to a child and mobs, the poor boy...WAIT I didn't hear him say he could not be adopted from some one out side the village maybe I can convince one of the clan members to take him in' I thought "well thank you for your visit I hope you enjoy the festival" he said "what festival" my father said wile still shocked about the fate of the boy "the defeat of the kyuubi" and with that I left wile my father stayed.

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8 HOURS LATER

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'Dam it where are you Naruto" I thought "you know your dad is going to want you back at camp soon Suzu" Riko said "I know um can you go tell him I'll be back when im done here please?"i asked "Ok but don't be out too late or yours and my dad will have my head" she said "ok will do" and with that she was off, 'now to find naruto'

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30 MINUTES LATER

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'PLEASE KAMI GIVE ME A SIGN' I thought then as if she heard me I heard his cry it was not loud but I knew it as him as if something was telling me it was him, when I found him he was in the worst condition I ever found any one in with out being dead "mommy mommmyyy" he weeped I could not take it I just could not stand there any more I gently embraced him, he flinched at my touch and tried to get away I held him close remembering any thing I could to calm him down "shhhh I'm here" he froze in my arms he looked in to my eyes "mommy" he asked with tears streaming down his face 'well if I acknowledge him there is no turning back if I don't he will be truly broken' to me the choice was unanimous dam the consequences cause there was a large part of me that wanted to be there for him, I carefully pulled him in to my lap then I rocked him back and forth wile running my fingers through his hair "yes I'm here Naruto" and with that he just let loose in tears, tears of happiness and sadness "let it all out Naruto".

When he finished crying "I'm taking you to the hokage ok?" I said "ok mommy" he said in a tired voice, my heart was doing a lot of things at that 'am I really ready for this? well too late now' I thought and with that I was off carrying naruto carefully, to not open any of the wounds that were healing wile also to keep away from villagers, when I reached the hokage's mansion I found a I found a very peaceful hokage and when I left he was a outraged hokage and saying things like ANBU demotions and so on wile I was on my way to the camp. When I got to camp I went to my tent and into my sleeping bag I realized I was going to be in a lot of arguments tomorrow "well I'll deal with it as it comes" then fell asleep.

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THE NEXT DAY

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I woke up to what I knew was going to be an interesting day, 'i really got to think this out hmmm who to convince' I thought as I got dressed and went down stairs I saw my dad working on paper work, I raise an eyebrow and ask "whats that for?" he looked up at me and smiled and said "for us to become a clan of konoha im going to submit it to day and by tomorrow this will be our home" 'crap so much for having time, well I know what I'm doing to day' I thought "that good news dad, um is it ok if I go to the village?" I asked he gave me a nod and I was off with Riko behind me.

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BETWEEN CAMP AND KONOHA

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"So what are we going to do to day Suzu?" Riko asked "we are going to go meet someone" I said "whaaat since when did you play with people" she said 'might as well get this over with' "were are going to get my son" I said she stopped dead in place her jaw hit the ground.

She stayed like that for five minuets I even wondered if she was breathing then she said "OK four things are going thru my head one is WWWWWWWWWHHHAAAAAAA two YOUR SON three YOUR FREAKING SEVEN four WWWWWWWWHHHHAAAAAAAAAA" "i don't have time for this!" I said "O NO NO NO your going to explain how you have a son!" she said "he's not my son yet we're going to pick him up at the orphanage" I said "and you thought this was a good idea why?" she said as if I'd gone mad "because he deserves family that's why and I don't have time for this" I said "and why don't you have time for this?" she asked "because it will be illegal to adopt him cause we will be citizens tomorrow I wanna do this now before its too late!" I said impatiently "if that is true, you humans are nuts seriously" she said and with that lovely argument out of the way we were on our way.

TBC

(A/N)

this is the core of my idea what if naruto was adopted by some one who would also be a fellow student at the academy

this story I did it I didn't think I'd do it thank you kyuubi's kitten for getting me past my doubts about this story and please ppl REVIEW this story is teetering on destruction so help me here