Just a story which i have being playing around with. It is my first story, please, please review.
All characters belong to Stephanie meyer
Just south of the hectic Seattle, a beautiful tiger lily meadow, stretching as far as the eye can see, is gleaming on the unusually bright and sunny day. Like an army of soldiers, the mountains surround the bright orange meadow. A small stream glistens in the bright sun, just west of the meadow. Moss spreads across the bottoms of the evergreen trees.
A family of white rabbits perch on the edge of the shimmering stream, birds energetically soar through the thin wispy clouds, in the dreamy sky. The singing of blue tits is heard across the peaceful landscape.
Disturbing the silent wildlife, two dazzling people stroll elegantly on the worn away ground, the crunching leaves barely audible under their graceful steps. As they step out of the emerald shadows, and into the glistening sunlight, their skin sparkles like thousands of tiny diamonds. As they look into each other's twinkling eyes and link their pearly white hands, the intensity of their love for one another radiates off them. They both dress in elegant outfits, she a midnight blue ball gown which flowed down to her feet, curls cascading down her shoulders, he, wearing a tuxedo, looked as if he should belong in a movie, a dream perhaps. Hand in hand, they pranced until they reached the most exquisite part of the meadow, gracefully; they both lay down next to each never removing their gaze from each other. Their in-humane beauty was no comparison for the picturesque view that is currently surrounding them.
All of a sudden there was a high soprano laugh followed by rustling in the holly bushes behind them,
"Alice" They both sighed; suddenly a pixie like girl pranced out of the bushes coming to a delicate stop in front of the couple
"Bella, Edward" she addressed them both with a kiss on the cheek. "I have a surprise for you both." Swiftly, she turned and let out a high pitched whistle, this was followed by a booming laughter and Emmett came booming towards dressed in a black tuxedo, Bella and Edward looked at each other with confused expression as Jasper approached them with a huge stereo balanced on his shoulder. As Renesmee approached the meadow, their faces glowed with delight her beautiful copper hair was in curled into tight ringlets. She was dressed a cream dress with gold embroidery.
Hastily music started, they both recognised the song immediately 'Bella's lullaby'. Edward looked around the meadow to find his family staring at them with huge grins of their faces
They all grinned "Happy Anniversary" they each turned to face their mate and then pranced around the makeshift dance floor.
Thankyou, please review
