Hi guys, this is my first fanfic so constructive criticism is welcome. Just a warning, the first oneshot may be a little dark but no too bad. If people like it, i'll write more. The first chapteri a bit short, just so I
can get the feel of Fanfiction. Thanks,

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Kim P.O.V

I picked up the knife, my best friend in the past 2 months, and examined it. The 2 inch silver steel blade, the wooden handle, the carving. It was all imprinted into my mind. This wasn't the first time I had done this, the artwork of scars lining my pale bony wrist was evidence enough.

Closing my eyes, I waited for the sting. The pain I relished as the drops of blood slowly fell from my arm into the clear running water, staining it red. The two new scars adding to the artwork imprinted onto my scarred hand.

I knew I wouldn't be able to take this anymore, I had even stopped eating, forcing food don my throat in front of my family, only to have the burning acid come up in the toilet again. I wished I could end this hell of a life. Suicide, as temting as it seemed, was not an option... I was close to breaking, close to it all ending just because he started dating Donna. Donna freaking Tobin. The girl who ruined my life, took over my life. The girl who kicked me to the curb... The girl who broke me. The girl who took the love of my life, my best- friend away from me. The girl who took the boy, who tore my heart.

Jack... the name brought back bad memories. Memories of pain, memories of hurt. We only saw him durng karate, which I usually skipped knowing he'd be there. Rudy let me train at night, trusting me and letting me lock up. Jerry, Milton, Rudy and Grace were the only people who knew how much Jack affected me, and how much I used to-wait- still love him.


Okay, so that was the first Chapter. The next chapters wont be as dark, but it'll switch point of views.

:) thanks for reading, and please review. It's my first story and I'd love feedback.

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