Justified
By Flying Star
Disclaimer: ' Scratch off card' This piece is not a winner, try again! Drat, didn't win. In other words, I don't own Teen Titans.
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Another dark Raven poem. What she thinks as she commits suicide. Again, I tried a different approach with this poem, just some experimentation. Try to spot what's different. I dedicate this to Instant Coffee.
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Blood falls like pouring rain.
Staining the ground with my pain.
Always rational but never sane.
Becoming empty as feelings wane.
Crimson red from broken vein.
Everything ventured yet nothing gained.
My soul is all can I retain.
Yet my efforts are all in vain.
Torn emotions against the grain.
Come apart like a broken chain.
Heartbeat ceases when I'm drained.
Hell's beauty, Heaven's bane.
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Now that....was a pain to write. Only because of the way I wrote it, but I think it turned out okay. Sorry Raven, but you and death seem to go hand in hand. As usual if you read, please review. I love people's thoughts.
By Flying Star
Disclaimer: ' Scratch off card' This piece is not a winner, try again! Drat, didn't win. In other words, I don't own Teen Titans.
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Another dark Raven poem. What she thinks as she commits suicide. Again, I tried a different approach with this poem, just some experimentation. Try to spot what's different. I dedicate this to Instant Coffee.
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Blood falls like pouring rain.
Staining the ground with my pain.
Always rational but never sane.
Becoming empty as feelings wane.
Crimson red from broken vein.
Everything ventured yet nothing gained.
My soul is all can I retain.
Yet my efforts are all in vain.
Torn emotions against the grain.
Come apart like a broken chain.
Heartbeat ceases when I'm drained.
Hell's beauty, Heaven's bane.
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Now that....was a pain to write. Only because of the way I wrote it, but I think it turned out okay. Sorry Raven, but you and death seem to go hand in hand. As usual if you read, please review. I love people's thoughts.