Ok, this is my first chapter of my first fanfic. So if you review, please be kind.
I won't do much, if any description of the already existing characters in Naruto because if you're reading this story I hope that you already know what they look like.
But if you do review, tell me what you think I need to do better or any suggestions or whatever.
I hope you enjoy.
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"I'm telling you, I'm gonna do it this time!" you screamed.
"Yeah right! And I suppose you're going to get your wings someday too!" The guy and his group started to laugh as they walked away. You started to get a stress mark on your forehead. Suddenly, you took off running as fast as you could towards the edge of the golden tile.
"What the hell are you doing! Are you crazy or something?" the same guy yelled. "You can't fly damn it!"
"Yeah, and you aren't suppose to curse," you said back to him. You reached the edge of the tile and jumped higher than you ever had before . . . and you fell. You passed the clouds as your eyes began to tear.
"Now I'll never become a true angel!"
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The Fifth-Hokage saw something falling out of the sky into the forest. What the hell was that? "Shizune! Fetch me Shikamaru Nara!" the Fifth-Hokage said sternly.
"Oh, um, yes Lady Tsunade." Shizune went out the door into the village holding Ton-Ton her faithful pig. (Me: why does she have that pig anyway?)
She found Shikamaru lying on a hill asleep. "How surprising. If he wasn't such a genius I wonder if he ever would have become a chunin." After 3 minutes of shaking him furiously, Shikamaru finally woke up.
"Hmm. . . hello." Shizune got impatient with him after the first minute of trying to wake him. "Just go see Lady Tsunade. She asked for you." Shikamaru got the little sweat drop thing, "Ok, ok, I'm going already."
"Shikamaru Nara! You are to find Ino Yamanaka and Choji Akamichi for a recon mission. I saw something fall into the woods and I want to know what it is. " Tsunade was not usually the friendliest of people.
"Excuse me, Lord Hokage, but wouldn't Kurenai-sensei's team be much more useful for this sort of mission?" Tsunade got a major stress mark. "ARE YOU QUESTIONING MY ORDERS! I CHOSE YOUR TEAM SPECIFICALLY FOR THIS MISSION! NOW GO AND FIND THEM!" Tsunade is definitely not the friendliest person when she was angry. Man, she's almost as scary as my mom. Shikamaru was gone in a second.
Specifically pick them? They were the only team available right now. Sometimes, Tsunade is just too unbelievable. Shizune sighed.
"Shizune." It took Shizune a moment to respond. "SHIZUNE!"
"Huh? Oh, um, yes Lady Tsunade?" Oh no, what if she knows what I was thinking!
"Fetch me some sake." Shizune got a sweat drop.
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Shikamaru found Ino and Choji in the usual place. At the grill. Ino still kept her blond hair over her eye and the rest in a ponytail and Choji was as usual a . . . um . . . heavy person.
Shikamaru quickly briefed them on the mission and they took off.
"What exactly are we looking for Shikamaru?" Ino asked.
"That's part of the problem. Even the Hokage doesn't know." Shikamaru sighed. I was going to be a long day. They weren't allowed to return to the village unless we have something about this weird thing that fell from the sky.
"What if it was just a bird, Shikamaru?" Choji asked.
"Then we're out of luck Choji." Shikamaru replied.
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After about half an hour of searching they were going to try a new strategy then just looking around when Shikamaru heard something. It sounds like crying.
"Hey guys, do you hear that?"
"No," they stated. Ino and Choji listened harder. "Wait, I hear it!" they whispered simultaneously so they didn't lose the sound.
Shikamaru landed on a tree branch and found the source of the sound. There was an animal the size of a human kneeling on the ground facing the other direction. It had large white wings that looked like a newborn chick's wings (the wings look like down.) Team 9, (me: I think that's their team number) landed on the ground with shuriken in their hands.
"Who, or what are you?" Shikamaru asked in case it could speak because it didn't look like a bird. The thing turned around. Shikamaru saw that the feminine face had lots of blood on it. Blood mixed with tears. Blinking blood and tears out of your eyes, you said,
"Where am I?"
