M.S

Disclaimer: no claimos dos narutos, mi amigo

Finally, finally caught up to him after so damn long, it was just him and Sasuke, no one else at all, there would be no interference, after three and half long years he caught to Sasuke again and this time would win he wouldn't just stand still like last time he was going to kick ass he was so pumped up, he could definitely take on any thing Sasuke will throw at him, bring him back to Sakura-chan, fulfill his promise and go back to being a team again.

"SASUKE" he yelled just like always, in that annoying voice of his, Naruto, he was looking at him once again with that look in his eye a look he could never understand before but now is different, completely and one hundred percent different. He turned to the blond and nothing more.

"why, Sasuke tell me why…" Naruto said asking stupid questions to him again " tell me why you didn't come back home after you killed Orochimaru, why you made a new team instead just coming back to team seven, are we not good enough for you, huh" he growled at the end.

Looking up to the sky above them, Sasuke put one hand one his hip and sighed. Naruto stared right at him but something didn't quite feel right….nothing looked out the ordinary Sasuke was wearing the exact same thing when they last met at Orochimaru's hideout, but right now in this light he looked…ethereal, was that…right, Sasuke looking divine, his creamy white skin that looked smooth to the touch, his well toned six-pack abs shown for all the world to see, his silky black hair that was flowing in the wind ever so gracefully, those wide shoulders, that powerful yet delicate jaw line, feminine and masculine at the same time, his tender neck, his revealing completely white shirt that glowed in the light making him even more heavenly, the large purple rope around his waist that added to his cuteness, the cloth under it gave him a look of majesty, he was the very picture of all that was beautiful……but….why was just noticing…or noticing at all…wait, what's going on, what was he just doing, how much time has passed…whoa no, it ain't possible as there was no wind or light right now and...no way he can't be blushing right now what the hell is going--

"I have defeated Madara Uchiha" Sasuke said finally. His voice soft and full of authority

"….who…" who is Mandala Uchiha…and what does he matter Naruto thought irritably and impatiently.

"so clueless…he is the founder of the Uchiha clan and was the strongest Shinobi in existence" Sasuke said still looking skyward.

"so, what does some old geezer mat--" Naruto started.

"the founder of Akatsuki, the co-murderer of the Uchiha clan, the mentor to Itachi Uchiha and the one who unleashed the beast Kyuubi onto Konoha, that killed the fourth, orphaned hundreds and sealed a demon in you" he interrupted.

"ter…" Naruto finished his sentence mystified. Who wouldn't, he just learned of an individual who was single handedly responsible for everything wrong in his life and found out he was dead just like that.

"he couldn't do it…" Sasuke said seemingly about to start one his rants. "he just couldn't regain that power he once held" what the hell is he talking about I just came here to take him home what's going on

"what power…regain what" Naruto asked, he might as well he was going to learn it regardless as Sasuke had a tendency to rant about power.

"M...S" Sasuke vaguely responded

"M . S...mangekyo sharingan" that was the only M S anything he knew

"no…" he said then looked down at Naruto straight in the I eye, his eyes beautiful yet blank, captivating yet empty, impassioned yet emotionless, deep yet-- how the hell is he doing this, did he somehow trap me in a genjutsu he frantically thought as his mind betrayed him with images of Sasuke's manly beauty.

"Naruto" he called in his powerful, yet soft yet mesmerizing, enchanting yet low and…why is he thinking so much about this damnit, is he losing his mind what happening, my mind keeps wandering……to things like…like…why can't I focus…I'm here to bring Sasuke back, not admire his sexiness…no wait Sasuke is not sexy…I'm sexy…he's…he's…a Nubian go-- depressing, he's depressing Naruto's thoughts were rapid and unfocused he was losing himself in thought, so much that he barely heard Sasuke say…

"Mary Sue"

He said strangely, the name in itself echoed and radiated….feelings inside him, that name… no, the way Sasuke said it sent a chill up and down his spine as if his seductive voice could actually reach out and touch him

God damnit his voice is not seductive what's going on here, Mary Sue, Jiraiya had taught a little about creating a book and certain terms they use the fictional writing world, Mary sue is term used to call the perfect character…perfect in everyway, all powerful, the wisest, the smartest, the noblest, the nicest, the prettiest, the one who always gets there way regardless of the situation and the one with the saddest past, hated by readers for being ridiculous and having zero flaws typically female Naruto thought back to Jiraiya's teachings as he expected Naruto to continue the icha icha line in his stead one day regardless of what Naruto thought.

"what does this have to do with anything" he asked completely confused why weren't things ever simple. "your talking about having the power of a fictional character… you've finally lost it haven't you Sasuke…this is reality Mary sues aren't real no matter how much Uchiha's seem like it" he shouted at Sasuke.

"with the power of Mary sue…Naruto Uzumaki…reality is nothing" whoa Naruto UZUMAKI since when did Sasuke say his last name. he's insa--

his thought process was interrupted completely as Sasuke was now right behind him, less than a second later his torso exploded in cuts, his blood flew everywhere, he fell back completely stunned, wait back, but wasn't Sasuke just-- "you even fall slowly" Sasuke said right in front of him, with Chidori glowing brightly he rammed it into his throat severing head from body…… his life was over, just like that, the future Hokage was killed brutally by his best friend…never to live again

hopefully this will turn out as good as i'm trying to make, an please reviewers compliments are fine but give a nice logical flame to see where could have done better...i need perfection...damn you.