Hello everyone this is a new story I'm working on since I haven't gotten the inspiration I needed to work on the others have on hold for atm. Hope you like it tell me what you think at the end by well reviewing. Why? Because reviews equal to an update so choose wisely my fellow readers haha (wink)
Chapter One- Stranger's Cry
Confusion and nausea filled me,
I feel shaken and dizzy,
What is this feeling that shook me?
That tensed me completely and made my bones ache almost if they were to break from the intensity of it (pain). "What is this?" I strained to say. I thought about it over and over again to myself. I fell to the floor with a thud, my vision blurred and my heart ached as if breaking as if… I was in the verge of dying. Everything was closing down on me turning pitch black ad before I fell to the hole before me I heard an agonizing patronizing scream in my head, "Why?!!!" I didn't know who the desperate heartbreaking cry belonged to but I knew one thing: that person was in excruciating pain…
Well what do you think ladies and gentlemen? That's a preface or chapter one or whatever you might call it… whose point of view was this? Who was in pain? Why was that person in pain to begin with? Why was this person (who started the story) hurting as well? Ahh… so many questions so little answers, right? Well review and tell what you think I'll be updating soon. Just giving you all a chance to see bits of the story I've come up with and you all will decide the fate of the story. Will it continue? Or will it have ended before it even started? Oh well enough drama. Review already- please
Themysteryofjade